Awakening

Rising of the sun, Lifts impervious night fog: Waking forest floor.

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Sharon Winter

Date: 4/16/2010 5:21:00 AM

Happy belated birthday dear Raul!!! Beautiful haiku, of course. : )) Hope your day was splendid and life is beautiful. love, shar xo

Skat A

Date: 3/10/2010 4:18:00 PM

A wonderful read, enjoyed..

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/10/2010 11:11:00 AM

And I take that as a high compliment from you, as you are very far advanced from me in this form. I like your contests very much. Thank you sincerely for the honor. Regards, Gerard.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/6/2010 4:12:00 AM

With the mist rising. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Savannah Rose Harper

Date: 3/5/2010 10:18:00 PM

Wow This is one of your all greatest dude... i literally ALL of them are spectacularificalousitviousiniquidinially SUPERIOR!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/5/2010 4:42:00 PM

Vivid visual Raul.. and very expressive words in your Haiku... good luck on the sale of your new book too.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/5/2010 1:41:00 PM

Lovely picture Raul..a tapestry of beauty and serenity..Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/5/2010 1:05:00 PM

Very nice image of the earth waking up, Raul. You'll find a lot of fog here near the seashore and over lakes. It must be amazing to see it in the forest. Love, Carolyn

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 3/5/2010 12:29:00 PM

The imagery here is just great, can see all thelittle creatures of the forest scurryuing around as dawn breaks. Very relaxing picture here