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sorry sometimes I need a rewrite, excuse please

In my dream they were an old couple wrinkled 
 
 small and gray smiling faces wishing us well 

 as I was growing old myselff with crinkled eyes
 
 away from any medical unexpected surprise

 instead I felt the sun’s warmth, the trees, blue skies 

 and all the potential with future bright living days

 my husband was no longer in a hurry 

 no running to the pharmacy at Safeway
 
 instead we walked in the rocky cliffs by the bay 

 hearing the tumble and rumble  of waves 

 the seal barks, surfers shouts, the ocean spray

 no worries about hidden dangers of infections

 no tired, achy muscles. no daily injections

 only reflections and projections of life 

 of music and lights with the body’s insistence

 moving through the earth with persistence

 to fight for the life of the forests and seas

 to listen to the rhymes of music’s dances

 the light of transcendence the reality of excellence 

 the sentient force organic in the cosmic universe 

 that transforms all life in an open free existence

 And when I awoke in the light of the sun 

 I heard the small birds' songs ——-

      ——-  offering my heart their assistance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/29/2019 11:14:00 AM
Lovely penning Linda, quite marvellous!
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Date: 10/28/2018 9:57:00 AM
This is quite beautiful.
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