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Awakening

My head’s reeling it’s all too surreal My heart questions just what is real My mind couldn’t describe how I feel, O spirits awaken my conscience. An overwhelming feeling of longing Hopes and fears together thronging I wonder why it’s me fate is wronging, Oh, I long for self-transcendence. ~A Brian Strand contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/9/2018 11:13:00 AM
Deep and awesome. Congrats on a well deserved win, Abdul.
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Date: 3/9/2018 7:42:00 AM
- Excellent poem my friend
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Date: 3/9/2018 7:32:00 AM
Congrats Abdul :)
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Abdul Malik
Date: 3/9/2018 10:34:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 3/7/2018 6:06:00 AM
Deep feeling invoked!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 3/9/2018 10:34:00 AM
Thanks Kim. Appreciate.

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