Awakened Soul

Days seem long  and the nights so cold,
The cloudless skies tells it all,
Of how her spirit felt lost and all alone,
And her feelings out of control,
As she remembered her first encounter with her prince charming.

She remembered when their eyes met,
Their hearts felt as if an electric plug had shot in them,
Her smile knocked him off his feet while his charm turned her on,
Her lonely days were now gone,
The rest was  history yet to be told.

Her prince charming is  now back again her life,
Because it was never the  right time for both of them to part ways,
As  the  famous  Hawaiian band  played their songs,
The long enticing beats awoke feelings  that they never felt before,
With  its  soothing traits bringing them their hearts together.

Swaying  their hips side by side letting their groove  get into their shoes,
As the air is filled with laughter,joy and pleasure,
'Oh what a beautiful  day indeed,'she whispered into his ear
Let's  dance as though we will never dance again,
Dance the night away and get lost in our own world of fantasy,
As we watch the sunset and listen to  the music  slowly fading away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/5/2013 4:23:00 PM
hey.. i really like your poem... i like how i can feel what you felt when you wrote it.. welcome to soup... hope you enjoy. check out my poems, maybe we can learn from each other :)
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Date: 8/21/2013 2:05:00 AM
hey Anunda,thanks for welcoming me to soup,i will check them out :)
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