Awaken

World filled with heavenly lights
As stardust touches the earth tonight

Silvery moon cast shadows below
On winter's newly fallen snow

A place where the heaven's lie
Spirit flies into the dark blue sky

As dawn awakens the morning sun
Drifting timelessly a new day has come.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 11:17 PM
so beautiful and even better, Phyllis. just think, spring is now coming!!
Makama Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 8:22 AM
Great lines with blessed words. Thanks for the magnificient share. I hope the new year is going well so far..
Smith Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 7:12 PM
What a beautiful picture you painted Phyllis...hugs Tim
Fleming Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 1:06 PM
I like this, Phyllis...Excellently done!! :) john.
Andresen Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 11:33 AM
- A wonderful winter picture, dear Phyllis ..... but,cold at your ..... hope the sun will heat a little !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Laurie Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 12:10 AM
G'day Phyllis... Guess who? Nicely put together for a Canadian winter sunrise. Thank you Phyllis. Lindsay
Babcock Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 10:58 AM
Thanks my friend and a cold Can. sunrise it is.
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