Awaken

I wish to rise out from the atmosphere
Where we claim the impossible.
I wish to inhale the newest of breaths,
Open my previously gray eyes-
Unstoppable to see things veiled to those immature.
I wish to rise beyond temporal grief,
Erupt through the sensitives of hostility and desire. 
I wish to witness the miracle of a vile, twisted seed 
Replanted upright, then bloom between the eves of anguish and rage.
I wish to rise with the sun
And let my arms be motionless around
Those who have laid their wounded eyes upon the horizon.
There , under the temperate glow,
They will become temperate themselves,
Become tamed in a disheveled time. 
They will be awakened such as I have been awakened,
And we will be watchful as the remaining others 
Fade further into the distance
And further into the atmosphere where
They claim the imposible.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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King Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 8:50 AM
"The Valley of Anchor" I just wanted to THANK everyone kind enough to read and comment on my poetry! It makes me soooo excited to hear positive feedback. :) For all those you enjoy my work and wish to read more, you can purchase my first BOOK of poetry (I published at 16) at almneyking.com. I would appreciate anyone's effort to support me. Thanks and love you all. GOD BLESS.
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July 7, 2012 at 10:48 PM
great write,loved it!
King Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 8:51 AM
Thanks a ton Stephan! :) For more visit my website, almneyking.com!
Hill Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 9:28 AM
One of the best writes I've read in sometime. Keep up the excellent work....TAH
Brown Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 7:15 AM
I want to thank you so much for your kind words on my writings Almney. I am so far behind on everything including my life away from PoetrySoup. So will you please forgive me if I am not right on top of my comments and thank you's. I am trying. It is a pleasure to read your poetry today as I leave you this thank you. Love and blessings, Carol
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June 25, 2012 at 4:58 PM
very nice poem!!
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June 25, 2012 at 1:17 PM
Love this poem of yours Almney!!
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