Awake in the moment

For Constance's Contest
Write sixteen beautiful lines
05/13/2025


The moment I cast all indecision
to subsist in peace without suspicion
The moment I shed all premonition
And wake up in truth without persuasion

The moment I find in introspection
A silent blessing on strong foundation
The moment I face realization
And join in light and life’s celebration

The moment I rise in still elation
Above the anguish of life’s commotion
The moment I feel the inspiration
Of true love beyond imagination

The moment I bask in admiration
And meekly kneel in great devotion
The moment I exult in God’s creation
Then my soul awakens to salvation
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Andresen Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 8:46 AM
- Congratulations on your sixteen beautiful lines poem, Sean :) -
Rodrigues Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 6:33 AM
Very nice, Sean! God bless you!
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May 13, 2025 at 4:15 PM
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