Awake

Your sons and daughters have gathered
Under the great odum tree
We have come to offer the fruits of our lips

Can you hear the rhythmic tunes of the xylophone?
Can you hear the vibrations from the flutes?
Can you hear the sounds of our melody?

Awake!

We are the children of your great heritage
We are the children of your great tribe
The tribe our ancestors gave us
The tribe that is not complete without
Its mortar and pistil

We are under the great odum tree
The tree that stands between our two tribes
The tree that gave our posterities life

Your kings are here
Your elders are here
Your children are here

Awake! And listen to our great melody.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Devnath  Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 12:50 PM
Yes, it's great melody not only of the tribes but of all, I think. Lovely done, my friend. Loved always, bl
Solomon Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 3:44 AM
Thanks bl, i also enjoy reading your poems. You're a good writer, peace
Ball Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 12:04 PM
WoW! This is not just beautiful but very nicely expressed. Great job here. God Bless, JB
Solomon Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 12:26 PM
Thank JB
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 8:32 AM
Well done..excellent imagery here!!
Solomon Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 8:34 AM
Thanks
Madonsela Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 6:49 AM
YES, i can hear them. images painted so perfectly here. *smiles* ron
Solomon Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 6:49 AM
Thanks...
Grisetti Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 6:46 AM
I can hear your music. Tunefully written.
Solomon Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 6:59 AM
Thanks so much
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