Awake

Eyes wide open now
In darkness we will see far
Dawn is waking loud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 17, 2009 at 2:23 PM
Much said in just three lines. Gives the reader something to think about. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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April 17, 2009 at 3:54 AM
lovely write ... well written!! ~ Arany
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April 16, 2009 at 2:12 PM
Nice senryu Marvin, great work...Raul
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April 16, 2009 at 10:36 AM
Beautiful poem. Here...The dawn wakes aloud (5cylab). Pls. reentry this beautiful haiku. It's a splendor. All the best.
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April 16, 2009 at 9:57 AM
pretty
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April 16, 2009 at 9:34 AM
This is very intriguing, Marvin. Clever! Love the concept of dawn "waking loud." Great writing.
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April 16, 2009 at 9:14 AM
that last line is killer. well done, bro.
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