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Awake

Eyes wide open now In darkness we will see far Dawn is waking loud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/17/2009 2:23:00 PM
Much said in just three lines. Gives the reader something to think about. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/17/2009 3:54:00 AM
lovely write ... well written!! ~ Arany
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Date: 4/16/2009 2:12:00 PM
Nice senryu Marvin, great work...Raul
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Date: 4/16/2009 10:36:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Here...The dawn wakes aloud (5cylab). Pls. reentry this beautiful haiku. It's a splendor. All the best.
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Date: 4/16/2009 9:57:00 AM
pretty
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Date: 4/16/2009 9:34:00 AM
This is very intriguing, Marvin. Clever! Love the concept of dawn "waking loud." Great writing.
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Date: 4/16/2009 9:14:00 AM
that last line is killer. well done, bro.
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