Awake

winter snow so warm
     In a dream-in a vision
Awake now-cold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Vangaveti Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 11:57 PM
Snow so warm!! A witty write !!
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 12:41 AM
Thank you Swetha
Kiser Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 7:58 PM
Imagery too good; had to fav.
May Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 6:55 PM
Very nice haiku Allen..snow still coming in spring!
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 6:57 PM
Thank you Joeseph
Rose  Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 6:53 PM
Three little luminous lines that light up the page and my heart, Snow can be so beautiful, especially when it arrives with warm lights and fireplaces. Have a wonderful day dear Allen.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 6:57 PM
Thank you Pixie Dust
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