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winter snow so warm In a dream-in a vision Awake now-cold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/10/2019 11:57:00 PM
Snow so warm!! A witty write !!
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allen beilschmidt sr.
Date: 4/11/2019 12:41:00 AM
Thank you Swetha
Date: 4/10/2019 7:58:00 PM
Imagery too good; had to fav.
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Date: 4/10/2019 6:55:00 PM
Very nice haiku Allen..snow still coming in spring!
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allen beilschmidt sr.
Date: 4/10/2019 6:57:00 PM
Thank you Joeseph
Date: 4/10/2019 6:53:00 PM
Three little luminous lines that light up the page and my heart, Snow can be so beautiful, especially when it arrives with warm lights and fireplaces. Have a wonderful day dear Allen.
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allen beilschmidt sr.
Date: 4/10/2019 6:57:00 PM
Thank you Pixie Dust