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Awake

winter snow so warm In a dream-in a vision Awake now-cold

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Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 4/10/2019 11:57:00 PM

Snow so warm!! A witty write !!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/11/2019 12:41:00 AM

Thank you Swetha

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/10/2019 7:58:00 PM

Imagery too good; had to fav.

Joseph May

Date: 4/10/2019 6:55:00 PM

Very nice haiku Allen..snow still coming in spring!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/10/2019 6:57:00 PM

Thank you Joeseph

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/10/2019 6:53:00 PM

Three little luminous lines that light up the page and my heart, Snow can be so beautiful, especially when it arrives with warm lights and fireplaces. Have a wonderful day dear Allen.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/10/2019 6:57:00 PM

Thank you Pixie Dust