David William Breidenthal Poet Haiku

Awaiting Rain

Here's a couple of haikus I wrote this morning! Hope you enjoy reading it as I had a joy writing this. These haikus are meant to be together. Please leave a comment down below too to show your appreciation. Thank you! ~ =^) JWE

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I long for the rain
To wipe away my lone fears
To drain these tears 

I wish for the rain
To backtrack my train of thought
Don't leave me to rot!

I hope for the rain
To douse me with delight 'gain
Overflow in me...

I pray for the rain
To rinse away the past pain 
Drenched in bliss, not vain

I dream of the rain
As it gently falls on Earth -
Marinated mirth

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Karen Da July 25, 2018 at 9:03 AM I just love how u put this one up. Very nice.. David William Breidenthal July 25, 2018 at 3:29 PM :) Thank you so much! Wish it could rain here in Arizona...way too hot to walk around here.

Richard Evans May 28, 2018 at 7:55 PM I like how you used the haiku to extend the emotion in this poem. This feels like blues. Nice! David William Breidenthal May 28, 2018 at 11:35 PM (: Thank you...such a nice comment you left me. Thank you -JWE