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Awaiting Rain

Here's a couple of haikus I wrote this morning! Hope you enjoy reading it as I had a joy writing this. These haikus are meant to be together. Please leave a comment down below too to show your appreciation. Thank you! ~ =^) JWE ~×~×~×~×~ I long for the rain To wipe away my lone fears To drain these tears I wish for the rain To backtrack my train of thought Don't leave me to rot! I hope for the rain To douse me with delight 'gain Overflow in me... I pray for the rain To rinse away the past pain Drenched in bliss, not vain I dream of the rain As it gently falls on Earth - Marinated mirth

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Date: 7/25/2018 9:03:00 AM
I just love how u put this one up. Very nice..
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Date: 7/25/2018 3:29:00 PM
:) Thank you so much! Wish it could rain here in Arizona...way too hot to walk around here.
Date: 5/28/2018 7:55:00 PM
I like how you used the haiku to extend the emotion in this poem. This feels like blues. Nice!
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Date: 5/28/2018 11:35:00 PM
(: Thank you...such a nice comment you left me. Thank you -JWE

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