Awaiting Her Birthday

Holed up in a Scottish flat
all day from six to three,
stuffin' my gob with Vol-au-vent
and pots of English tea.
As ocean slaps the briny stones
and swirls the salty air,
I'd rather be in my own home
than sitting in this chair.
Too late to fetch a midwife,
too far to drive the quay,
While he's at work
up here I stay,
'til someone comes for me.
I pull myself up to the sash;
the window shares a view,
of children in their uniforms
with tartans green and blue.
They walk the steep, uneven lanes
and giggle as they play,
And soon at last -
my own sweet lass
will do the same one day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Fleming Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 3:21 AM
Love this, Gayle...awash with all manner of differing emotions -- poetry at its best! :) john
Rodd Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Thank you John
Kruger Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 3:30 PM
that's such a sweet poem. loved reading it
Rodd Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 10:11 AM
Thank you!
Daniel Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 5:16 AM
Very nice rhyme, Gayle:)
Rodd Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 10:11 AM
Thanks Jo
Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 7:45 PM
Such a sweet poem with lovely imagery!
Rodd Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 7:51 PM
Thank you Kim. This is the story of my daughter who was born in Scotland.
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