Awaiting Dawn ( Haiku Contest.)

Young meteorite
slides across shimmering glass
towards signs of life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Freeman Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 7:16 AM
Gerard, Congratulations with this success. Agape, Moses
Chircop Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 3:33 PM
Congratulations..a well deserved win indeed..Charma
Muzzey Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 5:19 PM
Congratulations on placing in the contest, a wonderful Haiku. Caryl
Sweetheart Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 8:07 PM
Congrats Gerard on your winning poem in Raul's recent contest.. a wonderful win for a wonderful write from a wonderful poet.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Anderson Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 5:35 PM
Hey Gerard, congratulations on your win in the contest. ...Jimmy
Richards Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 3:15 PM
This was one of my favorites! Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest, Gerard! ~ Carrie
Brown Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 2:11 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul Moreno's (Awaiting Dawn Contest) Gerard. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 1:14 PM
Gerard, Congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul
Delacroix Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 1:03 PM
Awesome! Gerard! A winner in my book. Best wishes on the contest. Caroline.
Richards Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 8:33 AM
Wow...I would have never thought of this twist to the photograph! Excellent! Good luck, Gerard! ~ Carrie
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