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Awaiting Dawn

twilight
gentle, dreamy
moaning, searching, caressing 
ambrosia, insight; prayer, lace
mystifying,unbuttoning...deepening
nightfall, awaiting
dawn



Diamante Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Janis Thompson  Repost  10/13/2016

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2013

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Ralph Sergi Date: 5/4/2015 2:55:00 PM Hi nette: Congrats on your win. beautiful words! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/4/2015 1:41:00 PM Very descriptive winning work.. Congrats..Sara Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 5/4/2015 10:56:00 AM love the transition Nette many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 5/3/2015 9:41:00 PM wonderful win...skat Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/20/2013 7:45:00 PM this is real nice nette... PD Login to Reply

Sheri Fresonke Harper Date: 11/16/2013 2:27:00 PM Nette, lovely passionate poem, congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/16/2013 2:20:00 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara Login to Reply

Bukang Liwayway Date: 11/16/2013 1:39:00 AM Wow!! Congratulationa on this winning poem of yours friend Nette :) ;) an excellent piece indeed!! Cheers! Login to Reply

Juliet Ligon Date: 11/15/2013 2:15:00 PM ....so this is how it's done. : ) Great imagery. Congrats, Nette! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/14/2013 11:28:00 PM wowowow, I can see why THIS is at the top!! Congrats, NETTE Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 11/14/2013 7:29:00 PM I loved this one when I first read it...worth reading again,,,congrats on your win :) Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 11/14/2013 2:21:00 PM I so love the transition ......some fantastic descriptive words !! Well done !! Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 11/14/2013 9:34:00 AM Congrats on your superb win, my friend. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/14/2013 4:53:00 AM many congratulations nette xx Login to Reply

Dr. Vandana Sharma Date: 11/13/2013 11:51:00 PM Congratulation and i rally like the words you have chosen:) Login to Reply

Christopher Thor Britt Date: 11/13/2013 10:06:00 PM Nette. Great piece. Grats on your win! CTB Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 11/13/2013 9:56:00 PM Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating, nette Login to Reply

Suzanne Delaney Date: 11/3/2013 12:33:00 PM Twilight to Dawn and all the sensual romance in between. Captivating....... SuZ Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 10/27/2013 6:54:00 PM gorgeous diamante Nette....hugs :) Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 10/26/2013 1:14:00 PM WoW!!Great Diamante by you here Nette...mystifying...and a little bit sec c :) Login to Reply

Jake Ponce Date: 10/26/2013 9:03:00 AM It's jaw-dropping how you made a Diamante THIS gorgeous. Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 10/25/2013 12:19:00 AM I love all your verses but when you get romantic..Its exceptional..I love this dazzling soft silk beauty between twilight and dawn .This goes to my fvs..Charma Login to Reply

Jajosh Ongado Date: 10/24/2013 9:30:00 PM Without argument, this brief handiwork mirrors the range and depth of your vision! An honor to have read you. Login to Reply

Ashley Conte Date: 10/24/2013 3:10:00 PM The build up to this is lushly intense.The images are so vivid. I really like the entire verse.Perhaps I ramble,since I find your talent unequal to mine. With respect. Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 10/24/2013 1:24:00 PM I feel here philosophy too. Nice paving to dawn from twilight with all the diamante. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

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