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Awaiting Dawn

twilight gentle, dreamy moaning, searching, caressing ambrosia, insight; prayer, lace mystifying,unbuttoning...deepening nightfall, awaiting dawn Diamante Poetry Contest Sponsor: Janis Thompson Repost 10/13/2016

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/4/2015 2:55:00 PM

Hi nette: Congrats on your win. beautiful words!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/4/2015 1:41:00 PM

Very descriptive winning work.. Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 5/4/2015 10:56:00 AM

love the transition Nette many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 5/3/2015 9:41:00 PM

wonderful win...skat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/20/2013 7:45:00 PM

this is real nice nette... PD

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/16/2013 2:27:00 PM

Nette, lovely passionate poem, congratulations on your win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/16/2013 2:20:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 11/16/2013 1:39:00 AM

Wow!! Congratulationa on this winning poem of yours friend Nette :) ;) an excellent piece indeed!! Cheers!

Juliet Ligon

Date: 11/15/2013 2:15:00 PM

....so this is how it's done. : ) Great imagery. Congrats, Nette!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/14/2013 11:28:00 PM

wowowow, I can see why THIS is at the top!! Congrats, NETTE

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/14/2013 7:29:00 PM

I loved this one when I first read it...worth reading again,,,congrats on your win :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/14/2013 2:21:00 PM

I so love the transition ......some fantastic descriptive words !! Well done !!

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/14/2013 9:34:00 AM

Congrats on your superb win, my friend. Loved always, bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/14/2013 4:53:00 AM

many congratulations nette xx

Vandana Sharma

Date: 11/13/2013 11:51:00 PM

Congratulation and i rally like the words you have chosen:)

Christopher Thor Britt

Date: 11/13/2013 10:06:00 PM

Nette. Great piece. Grats on your win! CTB

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/13/2013 9:56:00 PM

Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating, nette

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 11/3/2013 12:33:00 PM

Twilight to Dawn and all the sensual romance in between. Captivating....... SuZ

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/27/2013 6:54:00 PM

gorgeous diamante Nette....hugs :)

Kash Poet

Date: 10/26/2013 1:14:00 PM

WoW!!Great Diamante by you here Nette...mystifying...and a little bit sec c :)

Jake Ponce

Date: 10/26/2013 9:03:00 AM

It's jaw-dropping how you made a Diamante THIS gorgeous.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/25/2013 12:19:00 AM

I love all your verses but when you get romantic..Its exceptional..I love this dazzling soft silk beauty between twilight and dawn .This goes to my fvs..Charma

Jajosh Ongado

Date: 10/24/2013 9:30:00 PM

Without argument, this brief handiwork mirrors the range and depth of your vision! An honor to have read you.

Ashley Conte

Date: 10/24/2013 3:10:00 PM

The build up to this is lushly intense.The images are so vivid. I really like the entire verse.Perhaps I ramble,since I find your talent unequal to mine. With respect.

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/24/2013 1:24:00 PM

I feel here philosophy too. Nice paving to dawn from twilight with all the diamante. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl