Nette Onclaud Poet Diamante

Awaiting Dawn

twilight
gentle, dreamy
moaning, searching, caressing 
ambrosia, insight; prayer, lace
mystifying,unbuttoning...deepening
nightfall, awaiting
dawn



Diamante Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Janis Thompson  Repost  10/13/2016

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Ralph Sergi May 4, 2015 at 2:55 PM Hi nette: Congrats on your win. beautiful words!

Sara Kendrick May 4, 2015 at 1:41 PM Very descriptive winning work.. Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison May 4, 2015 at 10:56 AM love the transition Nette many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A May 3, 2015 at 9:41 PM wonderful win...skat

Poet Destroyer A November 20, 2013 at 7:45 PM this is real nice nette... PD

Sheri Fresonke Harper November 16, 2013 at 2:27 PM Nette, lovely passionate poem, congratulations on your win.

Sara Kendrick November 16, 2013 at 2:20 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Bukang Liwayway November 16, 2013 at 1:39 AM Wow!! Congratulationa on this winning poem of yours friend Nette :) ;) an excellent piece indeed!! Cheers!

Juliet Ligon November 15, 2013 at 2:15 PM ....so this is how it's done. : ) Great imagery. Congrats, Nette!

Andrea Dietrich November 14, 2013 at 11:28 PM wowowow, I can see why THIS is at the top!! Congrats, NETTE

Sandra Adams November 14, 2013 at 7:29 PM I loved this one when I first read it...worth reading again,,,congrats on your win :)

Carrie Richards November 14, 2013 at 2:21 PM I so love the transition ......some fantastic descriptive words !! Well done !!

Bl Devnath November 14, 2013 at 9:34 AM Congrats on your superb win, my friend. Loved always, bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl November 14, 2013 at 4:53 AM many congratulations nette xx

Dr. Vandana Sharma November 13, 2013 at 11:51 PM Congratulation and i rally like the words you have chosen:)

Christopher Thor Britt November 13, 2013 at 10:06 PM Nette. Great piece. Grats on your win! CTB

Dr.Ram Mehta November 13, 2013 at 9:56 PM Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating, nette

Suzanne Delaney November 3, 2013 at 12:33 PM Twilight to Dawn and all the sensual romance in between. Captivating....... SuZ

Sandra Adams October 27, 2013 at 6:54 PM gorgeous diamante Nette....hugs :)

Kash Poet October 26, 2013 at 1:14 PM WoW!!Great Diamante by you here Nette...mystifying...and a little bit sec c :)

Jake Ponce October 26, 2013 at 9:03 AM It's jaw-dropping how you made a Diamante THIS gorgeous.

Charmaine Chircop October 25, 2013 at 12:19 AM I love all your verses but when you get romantic..Its exceptional..I love this dazzling soft silk beauty between twilight and dawn .This goes to my fvs..Charma

Jajosh Ongado October 24, 2013 at 9:30 PM Without argument, this brief handiwork mirrors the range and depth of your vision! An honor to have read you.

Ashley Conte October 24, 2013 at 3:10 PM The build up to this is lushly intense.The images are so vivid. I really like the entire verse.Perhaps I ramble,since I find your talent unequal to mine. With respect.

Bl Devnath October 24, 2013 at 1:24 PM I feel here philosophy too. Nice paving to dawn from twilight with all the diamante. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

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