Await

forlorn beach awaits high tide of life, reclaiming wasted stones, sands bringing back boats loaded with catch of happiness prosperity, festivity, longivity 16.5.2020

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Frances Schiavina

Date: 6/18/2020 8:59:00 AM

Thank you for writing such an uplifting poem and congratulations on a well deserved win!

Paul Callus

Date: 5/19/2020 3:18:00 PM

An excellent interpretation and a superb show of contrast, Mohan! Congratulations on your very merited win. ~ Regards // paul

Mohan Chutani
Date: 5/21/2020 4:47:00 AM

Paul, nice to hear from you again. Thanks Mohan

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/14/2020 3:16:00 PM

The anxiousness of waiting so nicely juxtaposed with festivity like the joy of a family when a sailor returns from the sea. Nice. Congratulations Mohan on your winning placement.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 5/15/2020 12:09:00 AM

Sam, thank for your appreciation.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/13/2020 11:06:00 PM

Mohan, back with congratulations on your win in Nette's contest. Hugs Eve

Mohan Chutani
Date: 5/15/2020 12:10:00 AM

Thank-you Eve.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/13/2020 12:15:00 PM

The way you have represented the beach with contradictory traits of waiting forlorn and rejoicing the arrival of boats is beautiful. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! :)

Mohan Chutani
Date: 5/13/2020 11:03:00 PM

Aditi, Thanx for your appreciation.Mohan