Await

forlorn beach awaits
high tide of life, reclaiming 
wasted stones, sands

bringing back boats
loaded with catch of happiness
prosperity, festivity, longivity


16.5.2020

adventurebeachverse

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Frances Schiavina

June 18, 2020 at 8:59 AM

Thank you for writing such an uplifting poem and congratulations on a well deserved win!

Paul Callus

May 19, 2020 at 3:18 PM

An excellent interpretation and a superb show of contrast, Mohan! Congratulations on your very merited win. ~ Regards // paul

Mohan Chutani

May 21, 2020 at 4:47 AM

Paul, nice to hear from you again. Thanks Mohan

Sam Kauffman

May 14, 2020 at 3:16 PM

The anxiousness of waiting so nicely juxtaposed with festivity like the joy of a family when a sailor returns from the sea. Nice. Congratulations Mohan on your winning placement.

Mohan Chutani

May 15, 2020 at 12:09 AM

Sam, thank for your appreciation.

Eve Roper

May 13, 2020 at 11:06 PM

Mohan, back with congratulations on your win in Nette's contest. Hugs Eve

Mohan Chutani

May 15, 2020 at 12:10 AM

Thank-you Eve.

Aditi Mishra

May 13, 2020 at 12:15 PM

The way you have represented the beach with contradictory traits of waiting forlorn and rejoicing the arrival of boats is beautiful. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! :)

Mohan Chutani

May 13, 2020 at 11:03 PM

Aditi, Thanx for your appreciation.Mohan