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Avoiding Lily Pads

smooth sunlit water lily pads shade predators fry swim warily 

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Date: 1/6/2020 1:42:00 PM
So innovative: 'fry swim warily.' Nice touch, Peter! :) gw
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Peter W Iversen
Date: 1/8/2020 3:26:00 PM
Thanks GW, appreciate the comments. Peter
Date: 1/5/2020 9:43:00 PM
This one describes the perils of shaded water so well.
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Peter W Iversen
Date: 1/8/2020 3:27:00 PM
Thank you Caren, appreciate the read & comment. Peter