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Avocado

All of the fats are bad Advocates of health said Avoid them at all times Axe down butter and cream And then they found this fruit Abound with fat that’s good Adds cream to my dry food Written on:08/09/2016 Contest:Pleiades by Kim Merryman

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/16/2016 5:07:00 AM

I love avocados!! They go hand in hand with biriani!! Congrats Sara, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/16/2016 11:50:00 AM

haha, that's some combination teddy! Thanks:)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/13/2016 4:44:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/16/2016 11:50:00 AM

thanks a lot Jan!

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/13/2016 11:59:00 AM

Sara, congrats on your well written Pleaides! Thank you for supporting my contest. Blessings!

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/16/2016 11:51:00 AM

Thanks for picking my poem, Kim!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/13/2016 8:06:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, Sara :) - Great, sounds good :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/16/2016 11:51:00 AM

Thanks dear Anne Lise:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2016 1:23:00 AM

Congrats on your win. I think you and I are only ones who did food poems!!

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/16/2016 11:52:00 AM

Haha, we are foodies it seems:)

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 8/12/2016 7:40:00 PM

Hey, I love avocados too! And I've read only good things about them. The bad thing is that (at least where I shop) is that they are rediculously high priced! I like them with a little lemon juice sprinkled on them. Thanks for stopping by to read me. Best to you in your writing endeavors./ M

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/16/2016 11:53:00 AM

Yes lemon juice is great with avocados,thanks Maurice!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2016 3:43:00 PM

I love it in guacamole, but according to Eat 4 your blood type, it's supposed to be a bad food for O's!! Dang it!! Love how you did your pleiades.

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/10/2016 8:57:00 AM

Oh really?Thank God I ma not in O.so I can still enjoy it:)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/9/2016 1:49:00 PM

Mmmm I love them with prawns and marie rose dressing lol:-) great one for the contest Sara - good luck

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/9/2016 3:17:00 PM

Thanks Jan,I love guac:)