avocado

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3rd in A Fruity Haiku Contest (Sponsor: Tania Kitchen)

Judged: June 13th, 2025

    avocado-pear 
bears curvy  dark effulgence~
  for guacamole

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Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/14/2025 11:13:00 AM

Trina, congratulations on your winning placement with your avocado haiku.

Trina Layne
Date: 6/19/2025 3:24:00 AM

Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2025 12:41:00 AM

I love guacamole. Just not the avocado. Haha. Very nicely done. Congrats

Trina Layne
Date: 6/14/2025 8:08:00 AM

Well, to each his own :) Thanks.

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/26/2025 5:52:00 PM

delightful ~

Tom Woody

Date: 5/24/2025 3:41:00 PM

Gotta love the guac. Nice haiku T

Trina Layne
Date: 5/25/2025 7:06:00 AM

Thank you, Tom! You can't go wrong with guacamole, unless you don't know how to make it right, and even then...