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3rd in A Fruity Haiku Contest (Sponsor: Tania Kitchen)

Judged: June 13th, 2025

avocado

    avocado-pear 
bears curvy  dark effulgence~
  for guacamole
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kitchin Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 11:13 AM
Trina, congratulations on your winning placement with your avocado haiku.
Layne Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 3:24 AM
Thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 12:41 AM
I love guacamole. Just not the avocado. Haha. Very nicely done. Congrats
Layne Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 8:08 AM
Well, to each his own :) Thanks.
Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 5:52 PM
delightful ~
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