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Avian Tones

When night casts shadows on the ground The robin, distant, croons Avian tones, enthralled by dreams While stars glaze like festoons. Ringlets of clouds, like puffs on flight The silhouette of trees, Nocturnal sighs and murmurings Are caught up in the breeze. Then, the new moon appears above Her white face shyly peeps, Light breaks so softly, glows the wings As nest of duskfall sleeps. Yet birdland rustles through the leaves Jays trill on bush and thorn; Where cardinal's imprints pass Across the dappled lawn. Soon these plumed wonders of the dark Close down for daytime's rest, To gather strength for next eve's rites Unfolding at their best. For The Birds Contest Sponsor: Anthony Slausen 11/2/2015

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Date: 11/24/2015 3:51:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 11/22/2015 10:55:00 PM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning work nette!
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Date: 11/22/2015 11:05:00 AM
Beautigul! Congrats on your well deserved win!! Terry
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Date: 11/22/2015 10:59:00 AM
Congrats on the win nette and have a lovely week ahead...hugs
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Date: 11/4/2015 8:25:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Nette - I thoroughly enjoyed the read ... CayCay
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Date: 11/1/2015 4:51:00 PM
Hi Nette! Imagery takes pride of place in this captivating avian poem. I love the ideal setting of birds settling down for the night; their evening song slowly peters out to be replaced by silence and sleep. Hugs // paul
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Date: 11/1/2015 4:27:00 PM
Beautifully described, nette. My compliments . You sound like a lover of nature and bird watching.
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Date: 11/1/2015 4:12:00 PM
Marvelous write Nette.. Kindest regards!
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Date: 11/1/2015 3:36:00 PM
Very delightful! I was captivated by the melody and scenery of your poem from word one.
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