Avalanche Warning

theistic silence or heavenly peace ~ pray for both going off-piste
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Eslinger Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 9:25 AM
David. The Titanic could have used such an 11-word warning. Our ptayers needed to result in “their” prayerful corrective action. Mystic Rose Roxe (Vie) & I have actually been praying “in agreement” about this in email lately. This piece is dynamic & impacting. There are many people (I think of) whom I’d like to see quite Impacted…. §8-( sally
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 12:18 PM
This one Sally has indeed much deeper ramifications, I still read it myself and find new meaning, I’m not sure what I tapped into when writing this one, but it certainly came from an arbitrary source, cheers David
Parker Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 12:08 PM
When off track want that Celestial Voice the most!! Interesting piece, Mr. Kavanaugh. ;o]
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January 12, 2023 at 12:20 PM
Heya Arlo, A little bit of irony here perhaps, I’m also seeing the imminent avalanche, so asking the celestial voices not to be too loud, til I reach safety, thank you Mr Parker for stopping by today, cheers David
Cunningham Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 10:08 AM
Always wise to have a plan b, hope your new year is off to a good start David. Tom
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 10:23 AM
Heya Tom, yeah all good so far, trying to keep out of trouble here or at least trying to avoid it lol, stay well cheers David
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