Avalanche Warning

theistic silence or heavenly peace ~ pray for both going off-piste

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 1/23/2023 9:25:00 AM

David. The Titanic could have used such an 11-word warning. Our ptayers needed to result in “their” prayerful corrective action. Mystic Rose Roxe (Vie) & I have actually been praying “in agreement” about this in email lately. This piece is dynamic & impacting. There are many people (I think of) whom I’d like to see quite Impacted…. §8-( sally

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/23/2023 12:18:00 PM

This one Sally has indeed much deeper ramifications, I still read it myself and find new meaning, I’m not sure what I tapped into when writing this one, but it certainly came from an arbitrary source, cheers David

Arlo Parker

Date: 1/12/2023 12:08:00 PM

When off track want that Celestial Voice the most!! Interesting piece, Mr. Kavanaugh. ;o]

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/12/2023 12:20:00 PM

Heya Arlo, A little bit of irony here perhaps, I’m also seeing the imminent avalanche, so asking the celestial voices not to be too loud, til I reach safety, thank you Mr Parker for stopping by today, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/12/2023 10:08:00 AM

Always wise to have a plan b, hope your new year is off to a good start David. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/12/2023 10:23:00 AM

Heya Tom, yeah all good so far, trying to keep out of trouble here or at least trying to avoid it lol, stay well cheers David