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Avalanche

Beneath the icy shroud Silence is screaming - gasping To breathe to survive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/2/2021 8:42:00 PM
Your words present a vivid picture in this haiku, Jonathan! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/1/2021 1:12:00 AM
Fabulous imagery it certainly is an icy shroud:-( many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/30/2021 9:47:00 PM
Wow. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/24/2014 7:30:00 PM
WOW, that is deep, and a very good haiku. Jonathan,, Stopping by to say Hello, and Wish you a very Merry, Merry Christmas!!! May it bring you joy, happiness and everything else you deserve. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year! Forever ~LINDA~
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