Premiere Contest WinnerAvalanche

Beneath the icy shroud
Silence is screaming - gasping
To breathe to survive
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 7:55 AM
Wow! Description of nature and its metaphor! Holding my breath! Congrats!
Pina Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 2:44 AM
Recently watched a horror movie called "The Thing" and I got flashbacks after reading this poem. Thanks for your submission, congrats on the win. Hope all is well - Seth
Merryman Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 8:42 PM
Your words present a vivid picture in this haiku, Jonathan! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 1:12 AM
Fabulous imagery it certainly is an icy shroud:-( many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Alex Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 9:47 PM
Wow. Congratulations!
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December 24, 2014 at 7:30 PM
WOW, that is deep, and a very good haiku. Jonathan,, Stopping by to say Hello, and Wish you a very Merry, Merry Christmas!!! May it bring you joy, happiness and everything else you deserve. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year! Forever ~LINDA~
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