Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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This is about past, present, future love when our love will be perfected..

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Love was available yesterday
Oh how I long for archway
Leading to doorway
Sweet heyday
Love

Seemingly a little more risque'
Was love, long for past spillway
Leading to doorway
Sweet heyday
Dove

When young love we longingly replay
My one only devotee
Leading to doorway
Sweet heyday
Trove

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 2, 2012 at 6:39 AM It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Sara. I want to thank you today for your kind words on my writing. Love, Carol

Don Johnson January 30, 2012 at 5:01 PM ah yes sweet love we do so miss, interlude a stolen kiss, had such a girl, her name was Chris, but she went away:( with wife stealing cuzzin Wayne:)

Jack Horne January 28, 2012 at 1:39 PM I love this piece - and really like the form too

John Loving Iii January 27, 2012 at 5:38 PM i'm beggining to feel like i have a heyday. no no no not me not yet.

Carolyn Devonshire January 27, 2012 at 3:08 PM Finding someone to love can be difficult, Sara, but those who succeed are truly blessed. Your poem has such a creative form and great flow. If only we could "replay" young love to restore our spirits for a while. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown January 27, 2012 at 8:06 AM I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Sara. This week has flown by. I hope you enjoy your weekend and find the inspiration to write some more during this time. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A January 26, 2012 at 11:44 PM Dear Sara, very cute... I'm glad tosee we all long for love.. and are available to it.. great verse..... Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a wonderful Friday! ;-) always,..pd

M.I.A . January 26, 2012 at 7:23 PM interesting indeed. Love, Dove and Trove (looking up google for its meaning :p). well-penned piece sara

Andrea Dietrich January 26, 2012 at 5:42 PM I love this pattern you made of your rhyme. VERY cute, Sara!

Russell Sivey January 26, 2012 at 4:17 PM What an awesome write Sara! Love has many entrances and we all desire to find at least one of them! Sweet write my friend, Great Work!!