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This is about past, present, future love when our love will be perfected..

Love was available yesterday
Oh how I long for archway
Leading to doorway
Sweet heyday
Love

Seemingly a little more risque'
Was love, long for past spillway
Leading to doorway
Sweet heyday
Dove

When young love we longingly replay
My one only devotee
Leading to doorway
Sweet heyday
Trove

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2012 6:39:00 AM

It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Sara. I want to thank you today for your kind words on my writing. Love, Carol

Don Johnson

Date: 1/30/2012 5:01:00 PM

ah yes sweet love we do so miss, interlude a stolen kiss, had such a girl, her name was Chris, but she went away:( with wife stealing cuzzin Wayne:)

Jack Horne

Date: 1/28/2012 1:39:00 PM

I love this piece - and really like the form too

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/27/2012 5:38:00 PM

i'm beggining to feel like i have a heyday. no no no not me not yet.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/27/2012 3:08:00 PM

Finding someone to love can be difficult, Sara, but those who succeed are truly blessed. Your poem has such a creative form and great flow. If only we could "replay" young love to restore our spirits for a while. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/27/2012 8:06:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Sara. This week has flown by. I hope you enjoy your weekend and find the inspiration to write some more during this time. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/26/2012 11:44:00 PM

Dear Sara, very cute... I'm glad tosee we all long for love.. and are available to it.. great verse..... Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a wonderful Friday! ;-) always,..pd