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Autumn's Wind

The trees change colors, The ground is covered with leaves; Swept by Autumn’s gust. Inspired by Abe Lopez's Haiku Seasons Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/18/2009 1:44:00 PM
Ah yes my favortie time of the year! I love the title and the imagery makes me want that time of the year here now! Great work! Keep it up.
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Date: 4/21/2009 12:21:00 PM
My favorite season! Gorgeous! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/20/2009 10:48:00 PM
I love the imagery, the last line is nice. Best of luck in the contest...Raul
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Date: 4/20/2009 5:01:00 PM
Daniel, nice haiku! a fun contest! I enterred one too! good luck to you! your haiku is wonderful! Jim
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Date: 4/20/2009 4:56:00 PM
where on earth are you? jhl
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