Charles Messina Poet Haiku

Autumn's Mornings

tiny crystal balls 
on an early autumn morn 
dew drops on grass tips 

unfeathered birds' nests  
shells around the baron trees 
three are on the wire 

blankets of colours 
brown, red, orange, and yellow 
pathed the forests' floors

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Brandy Nicole October 7, 2023 at 7:22 PM "Dew drops on grass tips," while being surrounded in a blanket of vivid colors. Now that's poetry in motion. You paint such breathtaking images with your words. This is beautiful in every way. My best to you, Charles. :) Hugs, Brandy

Victor Buhagiar October 6, 2023 at 10:13 AM Loved your haikus with great descriptions of autumn. Blessings. Charles Messina October 7, 2023 at 4:49 AM Thank you, Victor. Blessings to you, my friend.

Terry Flood October 5, 2023 at 4:35 PM I’ve walked that very path and you depict it perfectly, Charlie. Thoroughly enjoyed your woodland stroll. Terry Charles Messina October 7, 2023 at 4:50 AM Great minds walk alike, my friend. Thank you, Terry.

John Lawless October 5, 2023 at 1:20 PM Nicely done Charles, There are so many subtle intimacies within an Autumn sunrise Charles Messina October 7, 2023 at 4:51 AM Absolutely! Thank you, John.

Vijay Pandit October 5, 2023 at 7:34 AM Beautiful hues of autumn morning your convey, Charlie. Much enjoyed your descriptions. Charles Messina October 7, 2023 at 4:51 AM Thank you so much, Vijay!

Hiya Sharma October 5, 2023 at 6:48 AM A beautiful tapestry of autumnal scenery you've painted here with your eloquent words.. I am loving these delicate descriptions and those colourful references for the leaves which blanket the forest- floors.. A very gorgeous write, enjoyed reading this truly :) Charles Messina October 7, 2023 at 4:52 AM Thank you for your kind words and visit, Hiya...much appreciated!

Deb M October 5, 2023 at 6:21 AM Aww thats really sweet Charlie! Debx Charles Messina October 7, 2023 at 4:52 AM Thank you, Deb :) xx