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Autumn's Mornings

tiny crystal balls on an early autumn morn dew drops on grass tips unfeathered birds' nests shells around the baron trees three are on the wire blankets of colours brown, red, orange, and yellow pathed the forests' floors

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/7/2023 7:22:00 PM

"Dew drops on grass tips," while being surrounded in a blanket of vivid colors. Now that's poetry in motion. You paint such breathtaking images with your words. This is beautiful in every way. My best to you, Charles. :) Hugs, Brandy

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/6/2023 10:13:00 AM

Loved your haikus with great descriptions of autumn. Blessings.

Charles Messina
Date: 10/7/2023 4:49:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. Blessings to you, my friend.

Terry Flood

Date: 10/5/2023 4:35:00 PM

I’ve walked that very path and you depict it perfectly, Charlie. Thoroughly enjoyed your woodland stroll. Terry

Charles Messina
Date: 10/7/2023 4:50:00 AM

Great minds walk alike, my friend. Thank you, Terry.

John Lawless

Date: 10/5/2023 1:20:00 PM

Nicely done Charles, There are so many subtle intimacies within an Autumn sunrise

Charles Messina
Date: 10/7/2023 4:51:00 AM

Absolutely! Thank you, John.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/5/2023 7:34:00 AM

Beautiful hues of autumn morning your convey, Charlie. Much enjoyed your descriptions.

Charles Messina
Date: 10/7/2023 4:51:00 AM

Thank you so much, Vijay!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/5/2023 6:48:00 AM

A beautiful tapestry of autumnal scenery you've painted here with your eloquent words.. I am loving these delicate descriptions and those colourful references for the leaves which blanket the forest- floors.. A very gorgeous write, enjoyed reading this truly :)

Charles Messina
Date: 10/7/2023 4:52:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words and visit, Hiya...much appreciated!

Deb M

Date: 10/5/2023 6:21:00 AM

Aww thats really sweet Charlie! Debx

Charles Messina
Date: 10/7/2023 4:52:00 AM

Thank you, Deb :) xx