Autumns Gone. I Give You Winter

Fresher than a summer day
Through breath filled air we face the road
The tourists all have gone away
And frost filled nights their seed have sowed
To make the fall days their length erode

The beach is ours though not alone
White gulls push through storm filled air
Then rest on waves peaked high with foam
Their world holds neither hope nor care
But sky and sea with laissez faire

Together, close with cold clasped hands
The sharp wind cutting like a knife
Two set of footprints in the sand
We breathe in the elixir of life
And welcome winter with drum and fife
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 2:11 PM
Congrats Eamon on your quatrain "Autumns Gone. I Give You Winter." being featured. That's okay. you can keep her. You don't have to shovel heat. I'm not looking forward to it. Have a great one. Vince
Sweetheart Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 1:31 AM
Congrats Eamon on featured poem this week on PS... a wonderful write to share with luv.. hope u are enjoying your music my friend...
Brown Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 1:14 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Eamon. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 1:05 PM
Excellent expressiveness and creativeness..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..I especially like the last three lines..Spirits lifted high is what I feel when you visit my work..Sara
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 1:55 PM
So beautiful.Thanks for your very kind congrats Eamon.Teresa
Bloomsfield Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 5:58 AM
two footprints in the sand,so beautiful,it goes tmfvs. .and pls if you have time read JTHayes. .a new poet here as well. .thanks.
Brown Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 3:03 PM
i love this!
Mehta Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 4:41 PM
Nice way to welocme winter with drum and fife, Eamon
Falotico Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 3:55 PM
I agree with the master of poetry "Carolyn".... such a great take on winte for contest..
Devonshire Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 2:49 PM
Magnificent, Eamon! It's so great to see you writing for the contests and becoming an active member in all respects here. I love your description of winter by the seaside and the way welcome the season with your loved one at your side. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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