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Autumns Gone. I Give You Winter

Fresher than a summer day Through breath filled air we face the road The tourists all have gone away And frost filled nights their seed have sowed To make the fall days their length erode The beach is ours though not alone White gulls push through storm filled air Then rest on waves peaked high with foam Their world holds neither hope nor care But sky and sea with laissez faire Together, close with cold clasped hands The sharp wind cutting like a knife Two set of footprints in the sand We breathe in the elixir of life And welcome winter with drum and fife

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/8/2011 2:11:00 PM
Congrats Eamon on your quatrain "Autumns Gone. I Give You Winter." being featured. That's okay. you can keep her. You don't have to shovel heat. I'm not looking forward to it. Have a great one. Vince
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Date: 10/7/2011 1:31:00 AM
Congrats Eamon on featured poem this week on PS... a wonderful write to share with luv.. hope u are enjoying your music my friend...
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Date: 10/3/2011 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Eamon. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2010 1:05:00 PM
Excellent expressiveness and creativeness..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..I especially like the last three lines..Spirits lifted high is what I feel when you visit my work..Sara
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Date: 11/10/2010 1:55:00 PM
So beautiful.Thanks for your very kind congrats Eamon.Teresa
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Date: 11/9/2010 5:58:00 AM
two footprints in the sand,so beautiful,it goes tmfvs. .and pls if you have time read JTHayes. .a new poet here as well. .thanks.
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:03:00 PM
i love this!
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Date: 11/5/2010 4:41:00 PM
Nice way to welocme winter with drum and fife, Eamon
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Date: 11/5/2010 3:55:00 PM
I agree with the master of poetry "Carolyn".... such a great take on winte for contest..
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Date: 11/5/2010 2:49:00 PM
Magnificent, Eamon! It's so great to see you writing for the contests and becoming an active member in all respects here. I love your description of winter by the seaside and the way welcome the season with your loved one at your side. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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