Autumn's Glory

Garden painted leaves
Autumn's glory multi hue
Squirrels race leaves laugh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Gooden Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 12:53 PM
Got the picture, joy.
Wellington Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 11:02 PM
Thanks Sher!
Guzzi Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 11:22 AM
You have 3 parts here, you need to connect 2 of the lines gramatically & conceptually/ also there are 2 things which tell the season only 1 is needed ex: [the forest/ is full of colored leaves -- a squirrel chatters]Light & Love
Wellington Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 11:02 PM
Thanks Teach...still learning. I will make an attempt to do another one with your instructions in mind. One love.
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