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Autumn's Glory

Garden painted leaves Autumn's glory multi hue Squirrels race leaves laugh

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Sherese Gooden

Date: 9/11/2012 12:53:00 PM

Got the picture, joy.

Joy Wellington
Date: 9/11/2012 11:02:00 PM

Thanks Sher!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/11/2012 11:22:00 AM

You have 3 parts here, you need to connect 2 of the lines gramatically & conceptually/ also there are 2 things which tell the season only 1 is needed ex: [the forest/ is full of colored leaves -- a squirrel chatters]Light & Love

Joy Wellington
Date: 9/11/2012 11:02:00 PM

Thanks Teach...still learning. I will make an attempt to do another one with your instructions in mind. One love.