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Autumn's furlough

Slow dance weather’s well Faded leaf kicks last hurrah work done coming home

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/23/2010 6:02:00 PM
Congratulations John on a fine poem's win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/23/2010 5:05:00 PM
the second and third lines are lovely and unique! Light & Love
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Date: 4/23/2010 1:00:00 PM
interesting take! the leafs fade kicks last hurrah/would keep it in the moment / last line is a very nice juxtapose. Light & Love
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Date: 4/23/2010 12:14:00 PM
You have me smiling with this one. I think most will relate to your words. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 4/23/2010 6:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Descending Grace contest John. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/23/2010 6:18:00 AM
Congrats John on your winning poem in Raul's contest... wonderful words to depict the photo ...enjoy..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/22/2010 11:30:00 PM
Excellent haiku, John. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/22/2010 11:30:00 PM
Congrats for the win
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Date: 4/22/2010 11:16:00 PM
John, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul
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Date: 4/22/2010 7:20:00 PM
John~ A very nice entry for the contest! Good luck! Laura :)
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