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Autumn's Furlough

Slow dance weather’s well                                                                                           
Faded leaf kicks last hurrah                                                                                          
work done coming home

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John Freeman Date: 4/23/2010 6:02:00 PM Congratulations John on a fine poem's win. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/23/2010 5:05:00 PM the second and third lines are lovely and unique! Light & Love Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/23/2010 1:00:00 PM interesting take! the leafs fade kicks last hurrah/would keep it in the moment / last line is a very nice juxtapose. Light & Love Login to Reply

Date: 4/23/2010 12:14:00 PM You have me smiling with this one. I think most will relate to your words. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Keep on writing! Karen Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/23/2010 6:23:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Raul's Descending Grace contest John. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/23/2010 6:18:00 AM Congrats John on your winning poem in Raul's contest... wonderful words to depict the photo ...enjoy..luv.. "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/22/2010 11:30:00 PM Excellent haiku, John. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/22/2010 11:30:00 PM Congrats for the win Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 4/22/2010 11:16:00 PM John, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul Login to Reply

Laura Mckenzie Date: 4/22/2010 7:20:00 PM John~ A very nice entry for the contest! Good luck! Laura :) Login to Reply