John Beam Poet Haiku

Autumn's Furlough

Slow dance weather’s well                                                                                           
Faded leaf kicks last hurrah                                                                                          
work done coming home

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John Freeman April 23, 2010 at 6:02 PM Congratulations John on a fine poem's win. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi April 23, 2010 at 5:05 PM the second and third lines are lovely and unique! Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi April 23, 2010 at 1:00 PM interesting take! the leafs fade kicks last hurrah/would keep it in the moment / last line is a very nice juxtapose. Light & Love

April 23, 2010 at 12:14 PM You have me smiling with this one. I think most will relate to your words. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Keep on writing! Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown April 23, 2010 at 6:23 AM Congratulations on your win in Raul's Descending Grace contest John. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 23, 2010 at 6:18 AM Congrats John on your winning poem in Raul's contest... wonderful words to depict the photo ...enjoy..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Dr.Ram Mehta April 22, 2010 at 11:30 PM Congrats for the win

Carolyn Devonshire April 22, 2010 at 11:30 PM Excellent haiku, John. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno April 22, 2010 at 11:16 PM John, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul

Laura Mckenzie April 22, 2010 at 7:20 PM John~ A very nice entry for the contest! Good luck! Laura :)