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Autumn's Final Toll

Chilling tides turn the leaves of my soul For Summer's balmy days I pine and troll Residual reams of light o'er slighted heart scroll Scourging winds erode my wavering, intellectual pole Truant feelings flood my sensory console Alternating, rancid dreams my psyche patrol Molting mind is making my wit drab, droll Burrowing through lengthening nights; entrenched mole Color blind, as metastasizing changes o'er my body roll Twining memories strand my spirit on life's, rocky shoal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/18/2010 12:45:00 PM
Hi Stephen I think this is very intelligently written.I'm not familiar with monorhyme.I think it must be quite hard and you've accomplished it very well with your same ending line phoenetic sound and yet making sense of everything,also using beautiful imagery.I've got alot to learn. luv June(sylvia)
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Date: 10/18/2010 10:41:00 AM
Yes, we are about to say goodbye to the autumn - nice expressions on autumn, Stephen
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