Robin Dewalt Poet Couplet

Autumn's Arrival

Blue water tongues carve mountain sides
Pure singing into ocean tides

Rich ruby, amber, golden gems
Now carpet mother nature’s den

The living light that scraped the sky
Is cloaked in autumn’s cooling sigh

The beasts of warmth and chill alike
Prepare for winter’s bitter bite

Tick tocking towards a season’s death
Life shall renew in springtime breath

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Poet Destroyer A May 10, 2016 at 9:30 PM Robin, you have a great way of expressing yourself through poetry, XOX ~LINDA~

Skat A May 8, 2016 at 2:58 AM ROBIN, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT

Justin Hensley June 3, 2009 at 5:48 PM Very beautiful poem you have painted for us to read, i enjoyed it every bit! Congratz on being featured also!

Vince Suzadail Jr. June 3, 2009 at 7:32 AM Congrats Robin on being featured with "Autumn's Arrival." Vince

Ernilando Tugaff May 31, 2009 at 1:02 PM Congratulations and more blessings. Continue to enjoy the success and honor. Ernilando

Raul Moreno May 3, 2009 at 1:40 PM Robin, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

Sue Mason April 26, 2009 at 2:09 PM Beautiful writing that is now a "first round survivor" ... smile ... good luck in the contest, Robin !!

Carol Sunshine Brown April 10, 2009 at 4:57 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Robin. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Autumn Rose Wood October 27, 2008 at 1:15 PM Pretty, insightful and almost perfect! Thanks for writing this and for commenting on RAT.

Joseph Spence Sr October 26, 2008 at 7:15 AM This is so wonderful. I can see the beautiful images of autumn already. The leaves are so pretty while changing colors. The rhyming couplets give a special spark to the poem. Great job! ~Joseph

Mc Mc October 24, 2008 at 10:08 PM Blue water tongues carve mountain sides Pure singing into ocean tides! adore and such imagery!! great work!

Kelsi Nichols October 22, 2008 at 4:19 PM I love this. It portrays the feeling off autumn so accurately!!! While reading this, I could almost smell the fall season ! (which is especially nice for how hot it is here for it being autumn)

Adell Foster October 22, 2008 at 12:12 PM Robin this is an extraordinary Autumn write, I love the vivid portait you've painted with your words for all to enjoy. Thank you for sharing the read and for your lovely comments, I truly appreciate it :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell