Autumnal

A time to go back to school
Understand rain is warm or cool.
The pinecones fall to the ground.
Up in the sky lovely views are found.
Many leaves are red and yellow.
November is cold, not mellow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bartley Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 2:39 PM
I like how your title is different from the acrostic but not really. I can see why you would win a contest with this. Nicely done.
Roper Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 9:01 PM
Congratulations on your win in Lasaad's contest.
Seely Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 6:01 AM
Do you mean Sotto Poet's contest ? I got second. Thanks for explaining the conversation contest.
Greenhough Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 2:41 PM
A great play on words. Smiles to Darla.
Poet Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 10:22 AM
Congratulations on winning in my contest. With its vivid imagery, this poem is well composed. This well-written poetry shows your language skills. Your precision and eloquence in depicting line transitions impress.
Seely Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 4:27 AM
So I received second place?
One Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 1:57 PM
You did a great acrostic..
Daniel Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 9:18 AM
A lovely acrostic, Darla:)
Seely Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 7:10 PM
Thank you!
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