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Autumnal

A time to go back to school Understand rain is warm or cool. The pinecones fall to the ground. Up in the sky lovely views are found. Many leaves are red and yellow. November is cold, not mellow.

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Date: 10/16/2023 9:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Lasaad's contest.
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Darla Seely
Date: 10/17/2023 6:01:00 AM
Do you mean Sotto Poet's contest ? I got second. Thanks for explaining the conversation contest.
Date: 10/13/2023 2:41:00 PM
A great play on words. Smiles to Darla.
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Date: 10/5/2023 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations on winning in my contest. With its vivid imagery, this poem is well composed. This well-written poetry shows your language skills. Your precision and eloquence in depicting line transitions impress.
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Darla Seely
Date: 10/8/2023 4:27:00 AM
So I received second place?
Date: 10/3/2023 8:36:00 AM
Here where I live November can be mellow or brutal. Our winters of late have been pretty mellow though.
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Date: 9/30/2023 1:57:00 PM
You did a great acrostic..
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Date: 9/29/2023 9:18:00 AM
A lovely acrostic, Darla:)
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Darla Seely
Date: 9/29/2023 7:10:00 PM
Thank you!

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