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Autumn Wings

Riding on the wind All the leaves take wing and fly Wind beneath their wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/31/2010 6:02:00 PM
Great entry, Pal. Excellent haiku. Good luck. Ralph
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Date: 8/30/2010 8:46:00 PM
lovely, good luck in the contest
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Date: 8/30/2010 5:47:00 PM
lovely! good luck in the contest! ------Ell
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Date: 8/30/2010 5:44:00 PM
A nice write with good images on the flying leaf, Larry
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Date: 8/30/2010 4:37:00 PM
Larry, this is a great haiku and it makes me want to thank you for providing humor that allows me to have wind beneath my wings. Best wishes in Rick's contest with this creative entry. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/30/2010 3:28:00 PM
Glad that I chose this one to read...Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Sara
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