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Autumn Wings

Riding on the wind All the leaves take wing and fly Wind beneath their wings

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 8/31/2010 6:02:00 PM

Great entry, Pal. Excellent haiku. Good luck. Ralph

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/30/2010 8:46:00 PM

lovely, good luck in the contest

Eleanore Bourner

Date: 8/30/2010 5:47:00 PM

lovely! good luck in the contest! ------Ell

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/30/2010 5:44:00 PM

A nice write with good images on the flying leaf, Larry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/30/2010 4:37:00 PM

Larry, this is a great haiku and it makes me want to thank you for providing humor that allows me to have wind beneath my wings. Best wishes in Rick's contest with this creative entry. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/30/2010 3:28:00 PM

Glad that I chose this one to read...Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Sara