Autumn Wings

Riding on the wind
All the leaves take wing and fly
Wind beneath their wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 6:02 PM
Great entry, Pal. Excellent haiku. Good luck. Ralph
Roberts Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 8:46 PM
lovely, good luck in the contest
Bourner Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 5:47 PM
lovely! good luck in the contest! ------Ell
Mehta Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 5:44 PM
A nice write with good images on the flying leaf, Larry
Devonshire Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 4:37 PM
Larry, this is a great haiku and it makes me want to thank you for providing humor that allows me to have wind beneath my wings. Best wishes in Rick's contest with this creative entry. Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 3:28 PM
Glad that I chose this one to read...Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Sara
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