Autumn the Wanderer

Dead leaves are all you left behind
To break beneath my feet,
I hate to see you leave this land
Now banished by defeat.

A wanderer you have become
A wounded creature gold,
You leave red blood and bits of soul
A pathway for the cold.

You stumble on the roads of life
Each year we meet again,
And passing by you take my hand
And touch my heart with pain.

Old memories come back to me
Of years before the war,
The days before you fought the cold 
And taught the winds to soar.

You were my friend, we danced each day
And laughed in storms of flame,
I heard you cry each starlit night
Until the winter came.

One morning when I called to you
You did not answer back,
I searched for you all through that day
Until the sky was black.

Then just as stars begun to rise
Upon a field of frost,
I found a puddle of your blood
And knew that you had lost.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sanders Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 6:02 AM
Congradulation on your win. Well deserved.
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November 21, 2011 at 6:16 PM
How moving and how sad. You were able to let the reader feel your pain, feel your loss...A profound and captivating read Congratulations on your ranking. Well deserved and yet so very sad. And May God Bless!
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December 20, 2010 at 9:03 AM
Rauwolfia, congratulations on a worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses
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December 1, 2010 at 12:43 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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November 25, 2010 at 3:28 AM
Rouwolfia - Many congrats on winning coveted spot in Soup Contest..... Happy Thanksgiving.... Luv & Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2010 at 6:37 PM
Yes, I knew I had commented to you just recently. It was this one. You are very talented!
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November 23, 2010 at 5:56 PM
Wow, what a profound poem. The message is so tragic and so eloquently expressed. I really like this one. Congratulations. Andrea
Brown Avatar
November 23, 2010 at 10:36 AM
Congratulations on your win Rauwolfia in The PoetrySoup International Contest with your amazing poetry. Love, Carol
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November 23, 2010 at 5:40 AM
I'm so proud of you little Sister! Congratulations on your win.
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November 22, 2010 at 10:16 PM
Warmest congratulations, loved your poem it made for a great read, Anna-Marie.
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November 22, 2010 at 9:57 PM
Congrats for being among the winners, Cheers i take inspiration from you cheers suresh
Brown Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 11:32 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Rauwolfia. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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August 13, 2010 at 3:38 PM
This is awesome and I can see why it got featured!! Luv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 6:28 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Rauwolfia. Wishing you the best always on your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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August 9, 2010 at 4:10 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
Brown Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 9:06 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Rauwolfia. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 7:32 AM
A well penned poem - very sad
Brumley Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 4:32 PM
You're getting better with your imagary but you need to focus more. I know your talking about Autumn however it is a bit vague. Excellent write for the insightful.
Kendrick Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 12:11 PM
Sad write....I feel this is about depression and suicide..Tell me if I am wrong..Sara
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June 8, 2010 at 11:14 AM
Nice one, enjoyed this write
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