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Hija De La Luna

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Autumn Smile

Dull white clouds splashed the autumn sky –
But God beamed His brightest oaken smile! 

11.23.14

Copyright © Hija De La Luna | Year Posted 2014

how i feelcrystalline

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August 1, 2015 at 8:45 PM

Even in your absence you have made me smile. Come back, my friend. I miss you a lot! hugs!

Hija De La Luna

August 6, 2015 at 10:54 AM

Kim, my lovely friend, thank you for seeking me out from among the many pages of PS. It is a reminder for me to be back. I think I have to. I have missed your words and those of other poets here, too!! Hugs,hugs!!

December 4, 2014 at 7:27 AM

This is just stunning, another Fav!

Hija De La Luna

December 4, 2014 at 5:31 PM

thanks, Maurice!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

December 2, 2014 at 7:56 AM

That one unique..oaken smile of God..wonderful . Love Hija. God bless....rajat

Hija De La Luna

December 4, 2014 at 5:30 PM

thanks Rajat! God bless you!

November 28, 2014 at 1:37 PM

smiling golden season old jack is now around the corner excellent pen beautifully painted hlga

Hija De La Luna

December 2, 2014 at 2:02 AM

thanks for the lovely words, liam!

Andrea Dietrich

November 26, 2014 at 12:07 AM

Did this one not make the list? It is a shame if so. I sure did like it and I expected to see congrats beneath it.

Hija De La Luna

November 27, 2014 at 2:07 AM

thanks, Andrea! it did not, but, love it that you expected it to be included in the list :)) God bless

November 24, 2014 at 8:21 AM

Very creative and well thought out work..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Hija De La Luna

November 25, 2014 at 4:24 AM

thank you, Sara!

Andrea Dietrich

November 23, 2014 at 11:21 AM

AHHH, this is fantastico!!!

Hija De La Luna

November 25, 2014 at 4:24 AM

thanks , Andrea!

November 23, 2014 at 5:07 AM

beautifully penned Hija good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Hija De La Luna

November 25, 2014 at 4:25 AM

thank you, Jan!

November 22, 2014 at 11:01 PM

Lovely, sadly autumn is leaving us for the cold harsh winter here!!!

Hija De La Luna

November 25, 2014 at 4:33 AM

glad you find it lovely, arthur! thanks!

November 22, 2014 at 10:39 PM

Excellent, Good luck in the contest.

Hija De La Luna

November 25, 2014 at 4:35 AM

thank you, rob!

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