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Bright firecracker fanning in bloom

snuggle down its leaves makes me feel gloom.







Nov. 19, 2014    11.20pm
-a try of crystalline poem

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Nathan D.

Date: 12/5/2014 7:05:00 AM

I don't why this made me chuckle evilly. its very cool poem.

Len Gasun
Date: 12/9/2014 10:16:00 AM

;)Thank you so much my very dear friend Nathan for generously sharing your precious time to read my humble poem. Thank you so much also for the nice comment. Sorry for coming only now. We're super busy at school this week and the past week. Thanks God tom. is a non-working holiday here. Please give my warm regards to my dearest sis and friend PD. Hope she will be here very soon. We're missing her. Big hugs!

Paul Callus

Date: 11/29/2014 3:36:00 PM

This is beautiful, Leonora! These two lines expand in my imagination to produce a lovely yet sad painting of autumn. Well done! # 7 /x/ hugs paul

Len Gasun
Date: 12/9/2014 10:10:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Paul for the very encouraging comments and for generously sharing your precious time to read my humble poem. Biggest hugs and more blessings!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2014 12:03:00 PM

soupmail for you.

Len Gasun
Date: 12/9/2014 10:08:00 AM

Belated thank you my dear friend Andrea. Biggest hugs!

Len Gasun

Date: 11/27/2014 5:38:00 AM

Thank you so much to all of you my dear poet friends for sharing some of your precious time to comment my experimental poem. But this poem was edited yesterday night after reading some more descriptions of the form. So the changes made are the capitalization, punctuation and the image as well. God bless you all. Biggest hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/26/2014 4:48:00 PM

hey Leonora. sorry I am not seeing your other one. I don't want to see the entries till I judge!! which might be rather soon! thanks for visiting my poetry . You are such a treasure. Love ya, andrea

Len Gasun
Date: 11/27/2014 5:36:00 AM

It's ok my dearest friend Andrea. My visit on your poetry is always a pleasure and honor for me. Thank you so much for everything again. I arrived home earlier from school today, so I've to go around the soup for a while before taking my dinner. Hugs and God bless!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/24/2014 4:53:00 PM

A breathless beauty blooming in my eyes Leonora. Sure to be a winner if an entry for a contest! I hope you are well. Blessings, Connie

Len Gasun
Date: 11/27/2014 5:40:00 AM

Thank you my very dear friend Connie for the inspiring and encouraging comments. Hugs to you and God bless.

Donna Jones

Date: 11/21/2014 5:54:00 PM

Beautifully described!!! :-)

Len Gasun
Date: 11/27/2014 5:41:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Donna. Miss u!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/20/2014 11:49:00 PM

a cute cuddly one, Leonora!! sorry I only came tonight. can't believe the days I've had. glad to know you like ballroom. wish I had a partner to sweep me off my feet!!

Len Gasun
Date: 11/27/2014 5:50:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend Andrea. Yeah, I love ballroom so much. But I am not as an expert as my aunt.:( I'm pretty sure you do well and I can be your partner if you wish too but you need to maneuver me 'cuz I'm not so expert.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/20/2014 8:29:00 AM

hi there, dear lorry... been a while!..wonderfully imaginative and enchanting!..i was entranced with this great read... will you be here for Christmas?.. huggs

Len Gasun
Date: 11/27/2014 5:55:00 AM

Hi, my very dear friend Nette. Thank you so much for your precious time stopping by. Thanks for the wonderful feedback. I am so sorry, I cannot be home for Christmas because our school holiday is too short. I'm already missing everyone in the Phil. including you. Tcare and God bless. Hugs!

Casarah Nance

Date: 11/19/2014 6:42:00 PM

Nice, this was a beautiful couplet. :)

Len Gasun
Date: 11/27/2014 5:56:00 AM

Thank you so much my very dear friend Casarah. Yeah, I realized I wrote a couplet small initial letters and no punctuation mark. Thanks a lot. God bless and hugs!

David Meade

Date: 11/19/2014 5:14:00 PM

I feel the pleasure that only nature can give us -- a precious gift and you presented it with elegance !

Len Gasun
Date: 11/27/2014 5:58:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend David, but I altered the image after making some corrections. Big hugs!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/19/2014 2:27:00 PM

Great imagery; short, sweet and vivid.

Len Gasun
Date: 11/27/2014 5:59:00 AM

Thank you so mch my dear friend M.L. God bless and hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/19/2014 1:16:00 PM

- Leonora, I was hoping you would post a poem today :) - A beautiful gem on two lines ..... yes, beautifully my dear friend - I wish you good luck in the contest - Hope all is well with you - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun
Date: 11/27/2014 6:00:00 AM

Thank you, thank you so much my very dear friend Anne Lise! Big hugs and God bless!

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