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Autumn Oak Tree

Bright firecracker fanning in bloom

snuggle down its leaves makes me feel gloom.







Nov. 19, 2014    11.20pm
-a try of crystalline poem

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Nathan D.

December 5, 2014 at 7:05 AM

I don't why this made me chuckle evilly. its very cool poem.

Len Gasun

December 9, 2014 at 10:16 AM

;)Thank you so much my very dear friend Nathan for generously sharing your precious time to read my humble poem. Thank you so much also for the nice comment. Sorry for coming only now. We're super busy at school this week and the past week. Thanks God tom. is a non-working holiday here. Please give my warm regards to my dearest sis and friend PD. Hope she will be here very soon. We're missing her. Big hugs!

Paul Callus

November 29, 2014 at 3:36 PM

This is beautiful, Leonora! These two lines expand in my imagination to produce a lovely yet sad painting of autumn. Well done! # 7 /x/ hugs paul

Len Gasun

December 9, 2014 at 10:10 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Paul for the very encouraging comments and for generously sharing your precious time to read my humble poem. Biggest hugs and more blessings!

Andrea Dietrich

November 29, 2014 at 12:03 PM

soupmail for you.

Len Gasun

December 9, 2014 at 10:08 AM

Belated thank you my dear friend Andrea. Biggest hugs!

Len Gasun

November 27, 2014 at 5:38 AM

Thank you so much to all of you my dear poet friends for sharing some of your precious time to comment my experimental poem. But this poem was edited yesterday night after reading some more descriptions of the form. So the changes made are the capitalization, punctuation and the image as well. God bless you all. Biggest hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

November 26, 2014 at 4:48 PM

hey Leonora. sorry I am not seeing your other one. I don't want to see the entries till I judge!! which might be rather soon! thanks for visiting my poetry . You are such a treasure. Love ya, andrea

Len Gasun

November 27, 2014 at 5:36 AM

It's ok my dearest friend Andrea. My visit on your poetry is always a pleasure and honor for me. Thank you so much for everything again. I arrived home earlier from school today, so I've to go around the soup for a while before taking my dinner. Hugs and God bless!

Connie Marcum Wong

November 24, 2014 at 4:53 PM

A breathless beauty blooming in my eyes Leonora. Sure to be a winner if an entry for a contest! I hope you are well. Blessings, Connie

Len Gasun

November 27, 2014 at 5:40 AM

Thank you my very dear friend Connie for the inspiring and encouraging comments. Hugs to you and God bless.

Donna Jones

November 21, 2014 at 5:54 PM

Beautifully described!!! :-)

Len Gasun

November 27, 2014 at 5:41 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Donna. Miss u!

Andrea Dietrich

November 20, 2014 at 11:49 PM

a cute cuddly one, Leonora!! sorry I only came tonight. can't believe the days I've had. glad to know you like ballroom. wish I had a partner to sweep me off my feet!!

Len Gasun

November 27, 2014 at 5:50 AM

Thank you my dear friend Andrea. Yeah, I love ballroom so much. But I am not as an expert as my aunt.:( I'm pretty sure you do well and I can be your partner if you wish too but you need to maneuver me 'cuz I'm not so expert.

Nette Onclaud

November 20, 2014 at 8:29 AM

hi there, dear lorry... been a while!..wonderfully imaginative and enchanting!..i was entranced with this great read... will you be here for Christmas?.. huggs

Len Gasun

November 27, 2014 at 5:55 AM

Hi, my very dear friend Nette. Thank you so much for your precious time stopping by. Thanks for the wonderful feedback. I am so sorry, I cannot be home for Christmas because our school holiday is too short. I'm already missing everyone in the Phil. including you. Tcare and God bless. Hugs!

Casarah Nance

November 19, 2014 at 6:42 PM

Nice, this was a beautiful couplet. :)

Len Gasun

November 27, 2014 at 5:56 AM

Thank you so much my very dear friend Casarah. Yeah, I realized I wrote a couplet small initial letters and no punctuation mark. Thanks a lot. God bless and hugs!

David Meade

November 19, 2014 at 5:14 PM

I feel the pleasure that only nature can give us -- a precious gift and you presented it with elegance !

Len Gasun

November 27, 2014 at 5:58 AM

Thank you my dear friend David, but I altered the image after making some corrections. Big hugs!

M. L. Kiser

November 19, 2014 at 2:27 PM

Great imagery; short, sweet and vivid.

Len Gasun

November 27, 2014 at 5:59 AM

Thank you so mch my dear friend M.L. God bless and hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 19, 2014 at 1:16 PM

- Leonora, I was hoping you would post a poem today :) - A beautiful gem on two lines ..... yes, beautifully my dear friend - I wish you good luck in the contest - Hope all is well with you - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

November 27, 2014 at 6:00 AM

Thank you, thank you so much my very dear friend Anne Lise! Big hugs and God bless!