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Autumn Marsh

cattails winnow-
                   mirth abandons Red Winged Blackbirds





-inspired by Brian Strand's poetry

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Sara Lokken

September 2, 2009 at 7:33 AM

Very naturistic....the title is beautiful. Love, Sara:)

C. E. Mcmullin

August 31, 2009 at 6:05 PM

A well crafted tribute to autumn, leaving the reader with much to ponder- A favorite for my file, my friend- poet butterfly

Charmaine Chircop

August 31, 2009 at 2:50 PM

wow how beautiful Jim---my friend the nature lover--charma

Charlene Bird

August 31, 2009 at 9:36 AM

Beautiful and peaceful write James, it won't be long before it is that time of year again.

Carrie Richards

August 31, 2009 at 8:23 AM

I love this piece....it feels as if I am standing on the edge of a Minnesota pond in Autumn! Nicely done, James! ~ Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 31, 2009 at 6:16 AM

Beautiful piece Jim. Thank you for sharing today. Love, Carol

Christopher Higgins

August 31, 2009 at 4:37 AM

Beautiful work Jimbo...lovely llines flowing into each other.

James Peranteau

August 31, 2009 at 2:48 AM

Beautiful Monoku Mr. Goff,...I do long for the sights and feels ! james

Sara Kendrick

August 31, 2009 at 1:45 AM

I can see the cattails and the Red Winged Blackbirds. I suppose that fall coming has caused the lack of mirth. I don't see Red Winged Blackbirds around here very much any more. Very descriptive. Sara