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Autumn Leaves

4:50 PM 4 oct 2014 Watching children play in the autumn leaves Takes me back in time to fond memories Autumn colors dark and bright Raking leaves from noon till night Giant piles of colorful fun Leaping in then out for a run Around the the yard can't catch me Then back into the pile of leaves Tunneling through to the other side OUCH a stick poke in the eye Popping up to rub it well Hoping its not to red for mom to tell Then looking around at the mess I made I grab the rake and clean it up just so I can make it another day

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Date: 10/13/2014 6:45:00 PM
That's so delightfully humorous Bobb! Thanks for sharing! Love it! You're so funny my friend! Lol. A 7 from me! Enjoyed it immensely! Love and light! xxx D.
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Date: 10/13/2014 7:01:00 PM
One is happy to be of service. I am glad that you have enjoyed it
Date: 10/4/2014 11:23:00 PM
Excellent enjoyable piece! Love the imagery! Pandita
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Date: 10/5/2014 6:26:00 AM
I am happy that you have enjoyed my words. Words can be powerful weapons or powerful medicine. I choose to be a doctor. Take care and God bless
Date: 10/4/2014 5:59:00 PM
What a delightful write on Autumn - i still love kicking through piles of leaves when I walk :-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/4/2014 7:57:00 PM
Thank you Miss Jan. I saw some children today playing in the leaves and having such fun and it inspired the poem from my memories. God bless

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