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Autumn Leaves

Russet leaves snapping Underfoot like Dragons' teeth Slain cold a graveyard.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Date: 11/4/2010 12:54:00 PM
What a very imaginative piece- totally enjoyed how you likened leaves to dragon's teeth! & Wow, Lesley! I was basically awed with the inspired words that you wrote-- that came across as very vivid for me, could very well be the start of a poem! Loved how you described that lemony sunrise! I am more than honored to have inspired that-- keep on writing! Enjoy your day :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 10/15/2009 12:55:00 PM that's cold! Light & Love
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Date: 7/17/2008 6:56:00 AM
Enjoyed your Haiku very much - well done - continue to share and I wish you many blessings in life
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Date: 7/17/2008 5:10:00 AM
This is very good in form and flow. Your words are very descriptive and clear making for a very good read. MIchael
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