Autumn Leaves

Russet leaves snapping
Underfoot like Dragons' teeth
Slain cold a graveyard.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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K. Avatar
November 4, 2010 at 12:54 PM
What a very imaginative piece- totally enjoyed how you likened leaves to dragon's teeth! & Wow, Lesley! I was basically awed with the inspired words that you wrote-- that came across as very vivid for me, could very well be the start of a poem! Loved how you described that lemony sunrise! I am more than honored to have inspired that-- keep on writing! Enjoy your day :) -- nikko :)
Guzzi Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 12:55 PM
shiver..now that's cold! Light & Love
Jordan Avatar
July 17, 2008 at 6:56 AM
Enjoyed your Haiku very much - well done - continue to share and I wish you many blessings in life
Degenhardt Avatar
July 17, 2008 at 5:10 AM
This is very good in form and flow. Your words are very descriptive and clear making for a very good read. MIchael
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