Autumn Is Fleeting

In fields there near the painted trees
the last of greenery holds tight.
Beyond the mountains to the seas
soars one spare robin fast in flight.

Now amber waves are giving way
to sunburst orange and ruby reds.
And in the middle of this fray
young fawns are ousted from their beds.

There is a crispness in the air
fragranced with crackling leaves and pine.
A bounty of Fall's beauty where
the apple cider tastes like wine.

This favorite time of year shall pass
and Winter's sharp chill will prevail.
When ponds transform to sheets of glass
and painted landscapes turn to pale.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 1:49 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Any Poem You Posted this Week"contest Deb. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 9:20 AM
"Autumn Is Fleeting", beautiful Rhymes of Autumn, Deb, A great entry, best of wishes for many continued successes. Agape, Moses
Taylor Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 9:12 AM
Congrats, Deb. Awesome write. Nice going. Best to you and yours. luv Ralph
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November 5, 2011 at 9:07 PM
DEB ;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my contest... I'm just dropping by to give everyone a warm congratulations and gratitude from the heart. ((you may get this comment more than once, if you entered more than one of my contest this week)) Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 5:06 PM
Congrats Deb on another amazing win luv...
Bauer Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 3:17 PM
a lovely poem with excellent rhyme!
Quigley Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 8:32 AM
Wonderful imagery here Deb. "Ponds transform to sheets of glass". Love it.
Lampkin Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 2:08 AM
Like an artist with paint brush in hand, you have painted a picture perfect portrait of Autumn last days before winter.
Babcock Avatar
October 26, 2011 at 9:52 AM
Fantastic imagery on this poem. I get sad when I see the robins leave to fly south. Means winter is close behind. God Bless Phyl
Berry Avatar
October 25, 2011 at 10:44 AM
This poem is fantastic. I love the imagery and word choice. I also noticed that we have similar writing styles. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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