Panagiota Romios Poet Quintain (English)

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Autumn Idyllic Fantasies

Autumn Idyllic Fantasies
                             9/25/2023

          Little girls and boys have the sweetest dreams!
          Perhaps, all would love, owning a dog..
          Or the girls..…soft, pink, toe shoes, the color of strawberry
          ice cream?
          On the other hand, boys might like to be the owner
          of their own frog?

          Lie back on a swing, with eyes closed,all you hear is
          the calmest of a breeze.
          Like old friends, sweet memories are hummed by 
          a verdant orchestra of friendlly,leaves.

          Going back in the rowboat on an imaginary, sunlit,
          summers’ lake!
          Now you dream of sharing with others,
          When the moon and stars, were all yours,sparkling
          for you, to just take.

          For in the end, we discover we are humanity’s true
          sisters and brothers!
          We simply are interesting like books with different 
          content and attractive front covers!

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Christina Bowring September 26, 2023 at 1:28 PM Love this poem dear Pangie and the picture is perfect too! Such a lovely, unique way to express the celebration of autumn and I love the title! Love the second stanza in particular ‘calmest of a breeze’ Lovely! Lots of great imagery.A poignant message to conclude this delightful, dreamy poem. Where would we be without our dreams? Thank you my lovely for sharing. Hugs and smiles to you. X :):) Panagiota Romios September 26, 2023 at 2:13 PM Christine, I posted this thinking nobody can trilateral to it? I was super critical of the image as well. I see I was quite wrong.I, too, favored the 2nd stanza ..you know, as adults, there is still beauty. But, you have to have inner peace to find it,. I know I have turned a sharp corner in my poetry, thanks to close poet friends. It’s like I entered the city of the heart! A great name for poem, would you agree? Many thanks for your precious time…dear one! Pangie xx

Elena Eagle September 26, 2023 at 8:49 AM A wonderful melody in the creative poem. So well done. I liked this one. Panagiota Romios September 26, 2023 at 9:02 AM Wow! A melody! Hoe great you heard it.! Those sincere words,,,”I liked this one,are cherished forever by me. Sending you a prayer, too. You recall the sweet innocence of childhood! Pangie xx

Victor Buhagiar September 26, 2023 at 3:48 AM Simply an exhilarating poem. So much imagery, emotions and memories. Loved reading your delicious poem. Blessings. Panagiota Romios September 26, 2023 at 8:27 AM Blessings from a grateful poetess,from my heart in California to yours in Malta!! I am so happy you picked up on the imagery in the poem and the thoughts…and the meaning. A special prayer for you today and many hugs.! Pangie xx