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AUTUMN HAIKU

rose hips ripening
sun ,highlights the pampas grass-
shades of shadowing fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/17/2010 10:51:00 AM
I saw the rose-hips ripening in the forest off Lake Superior camping with my daughters in August....we ate some raw, tastes like an apple, loved it! INCREDIBLE HAIKU! jimbo
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Date: 8/31/2010 9:19:00 PM
Great Haiku Brian =) I have never experienced Autumn (The only seasons in Dubai are Summer and Summer) haha At least I get to see it in your poetry.
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Date: 8/31/2010 7:03:00 PM
very nice indeed, Brian. I can see it all in each line and the whole of it. Enjoyed
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Date: 8/31/2010 12:10:00 PM
Always a pleasure to read your amazing poetry Brian. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2010 11:40:00 AM
Great capture Brian- it's about that time
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Date: 8/31/2010 10:18:00 AM
is well written and visual to my senses.
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Date: 8/31/2010 8:13:00 AM
Ahhh...the perfect haiku! This is one of the best I've read...so glad to see your poetry is still here, Brian! :)
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Date: 8/31/2010 7:26:00 AM
lovely, much enjoyed, good luck in the contest if it was written for it
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Date: 8/31/2010 7:11:00 AM
Excellent haiku, Brian. Great entry. Good luck. Ralph
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