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Autumn Haiku

rose hips ripening
sun ,highlights the pampas grass-
shades of shadowing fall

Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2010

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James Marshall Goff

September 17, 2010 at 10:51 AM

I saw the rose-hips ripening in the forest off Lake Superior camping with my daughters in August....we ate some raw, tastes like an apple, loved it! INCREDIBLE HAIKU! jimbo

August 31, 2010 at 9:19 PM

Great Haiku Brian =) I have never experienced Autumn (The only seasons in Dubai are Summer and Summer) haha At least I get to see it in your poetry.

Robert A. Dufresne

August 31, 2010 at 7:03 PM

very nice indeed, Brian. I can see it all in each line and the whole of it. Enjoyed

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 31, 2010 at 12:10 PM

Always a pleasure to read your amazing poetry Brian. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. Love, Carol

August 31, 2010 at 11:40 AM

Great capture Brian- it's about that time

Doris Culverhouse

August 31, 2010 at 10:18 AM

is well written and visual to my senses.

Carrie Richards

August 31, 2010 at 8:13 AM

Ahhh...the perfect haiku! This is one of the best I've read...so glad to see your poetry is still here, Brian! :)

Francine Roberts

August 31, 2010 at 7:26 AM

lovely, much enjoyed, good luck in the contest if it was written for it

August 31, 2010 at 7:11 AM

Excellent haiku, Brian. Great entry. Good luck. Ralph

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