Autumn Haiku

Trees in leafy crowns
Of red orange yellow brown
Yet no birds bow down





For Brian Strand's Images of Fall contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
October 30, 2009 at 10:46 PM
so right! the birds are King! Light & Love
K. Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 4:30 AM
such a beautifully rich haiku! Tough I haven't experienced autumn, makes me feel like I was in the midst of it! Thanks also for your comments on my poem :)
Crane Avatar
September 23, 2009 at 3:45 PM
this is a great haiku .. you have played this one out so nice :) . Marco
Strand Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 12:52 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Corinne.Rgds Brian
Lopez Avatar
August 31, 2009 at 7:11 PM
a colorful haiku..with a great autum feel ....very nice!
Strand Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 12:50 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Corinne.Rgds Brian
Kendrick Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 11:18 AM
Nice Haiku. God speed in the contest. Keep writing. Sara
Golden Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 10:38 AM
"Each tree dons its crown"....lovely. Best of luck in the contest! Hugs, Donna
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