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Autumn Forest

Spectrum of color,
Lush strokes in numerous shades;
Gorgeous canopy.

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Laura Mckenzie

April 7, 2009 at 12:14 PM

Very pretty! Laura :)

Josh Torres

March 30, 2009 at 2:22 AM

nice now i can see why you like them you can express your self towards nature >>>josh

Steve Edmonds

March 29, 2009 at 10:12 AM

Spectrum of color, nice opening, makes the whole scene jump out.

Chris Goombi

March 28, 2009 at 11:48 PM

Autmn a fun time of the year for me. Lovely

Elizabeth Neal

March 27, 2009 at 10:06 PM

Marvelous work again here, you paint lovely nature scenes in your haiku's/ Nive thoughts. Love Elizabeth

Daniel Neal

March 27, 2009 at 3:14 AM

Lush strokes of beauty it is. DN

Tyler Martin

March 27, 2009 at 2:57 AM

Amazing to the eyes it must be. Nice haiku. Tyler

Maryam Jameela Haniff

March 26, 2009 at 5:03 PM

this is absolutely wonderful....u chose the perfect form and whipped up really well...Maryam*

Sharon Winter

March 26, 2009 at 4:06 PM

Another amazing visual as I sense the forest surround me. You are on quite a roll with these wonderful short forms. Love, Shar

John Weber

March 26, 2009 at 1:24 PM

Wow! I love the syncopation of this one; the "sh" sounds are reminiscent of chattering leaves. Lush proves a fitting description. Well done, Raul! Warm regards, John.

Frank F. Atanacio

March 26, 2009 at 12:40 PM

very lovely

Carolyn Devonshire

March 26, 2009 at 12:36 PM

That's just how it looks here in Tallahassee with the magnificent azaleas in full bloom. Nature offers us so much color, and you capture it well, Raul!