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Autumn Dance

Autumn leaves dancing
going to and fro in the wind
swirling merrily

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/14/2010 3:38:00 PM

Carried away by the wind..I can see the scene from your vivid description...I am glad that you are feeling better..I was delighted that you stopped by, read, and commented on my work...Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/3/2010 10:17:00 AM

fall a great time! Light &Love

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/27/2010 11:40:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this and it made me smile, Phyllis :) & that sure is horrible, having those accidents-- you are doing good just keeping off the roads this time-- and thank you as well for your comments :) sending you sunshine all prettily wrapped too- careful it's hot! haha kidding :) off to sleep I go now-- :) enjoy your day- nikko :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/18/2010 3:18:00 PM

pretty picture! please try a poem formy contest! Light & Love (thanks for the blog comments too!)

Katherine Stella

Date: 10/16/2010 5:51:00 AM

this would of been great for brian strands contest on his other site loved the imagery and boy are the leaves coming down up here in Minnesota and weather is turning fast too keep up the wonderful writing dear friend also thanks kindly for your warm comments on my works too hugs and blessings

Nate D.

Date: 10/15/2010 10:41:00 AM

a wonderful image of nature and its course of change, Phyllis. You offer the right kind of beauty to the light of nature with it's dancing leaves' luv n.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2010 8:57:00 PM

very pretty. I have done this kind of poetry before. Autumn does that to us. Luv, Andrea

Date: 10/5/2010 1:47:00 PM

I like the uplifting feel of this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Keep on writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2010 11:52:00 AM

What an outstanding way to enjoy a day. I am so happy to be able to read the excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup today. Hope you are enjoying your day and finding much inspiration along the way Phyllis. Love, Carol