Autumn Dance

Autumn leaves dancing
going to and fro in the wind
swirling merrily
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 3:38 PM
Carried away by the wind..I can see the scene from your vivid description...I am glad that you are feeling better..I was delighted that you stopped by, read, and commented on my work...Sara
Guzzi Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 10:17 AM
fall a great time! Light &Love
K. Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 11:40 AM
Enjoyed reading this and it made me smile, Phyllis :) & that sure is horrible, having those accidents-- you are doing good just keeping off the roads this time-- and thank you as well for your comments :) sending you sunshine all prettily wrapped too- careful it's hot! haha kidding :) off to sleep I go now-- :) enjoy your day- nikko :)
Guzzi Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 3:18 PM
pretty picture! please try a poem formy contest! Light & Love (thanks for the blog comments too!)
Stella Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 5:51 AM
this would of been great for brian strands contest on his other site loved the imagery and boy are the leaves coming down up here in Minnesota and weather is turning fast too keep up the wonderful writing dear friend also thanks kindly for your warm comments on my works too hugs and blessings
D. Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 10:41 AM
a wonderful image of nature and its course of change, Phyllis. You offer the right kind of beauty to the light of nature with it's dancing leaves' luv n.d.
Dietrich Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 8:57 PM
very pretty. I have done this kind of poetry before. Autumn does that to us. Luv, Andrea
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October 5, 2010 at 1:47 PM
I like the uplifting feel of this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Keep on writing. Karen
Brown Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 11:52 AM
What an outstanding way to enjoy a day. I am so happy to be able to read the excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup today. Hope you are enjoying your day and finding much inspiration along the way Phyllis. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 10:09 AM
sounds nice... pretty write!
Mehta Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 7:43 AM
Very creative with nice observation of nthe autumn leaves, Phyllis
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