Anoucheka Gangabissoon Poet Rhyme

Autumn Breeze

Autumn Breeze flowing on an autumn day, how cold thou art
How icy art thou fingers, when thou dost clench my heart
My ribs, my soul, why even my mind
Walking alone down the road,
Hoping to leave my ghosts behind
I suddenly realize that thou ethos dost match with my mood
Autumn, I believe only a hot coffee would lighten me up for good!

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Andrea Dietrich December 28, 2014 at 11:35 PM It went from classic feel to very modern once you got to that last line. I enjoyed reading this one on the winners' list!!

Kayod5 Kayode December 28, 2014 at 11:50 AM You painted good Image here ,congrats on the win my friend...huggs

Jan Allison December 28, 2014 at 11:10 AM love the imagery in your poem - mine is a cup of tea not coffee after an autumnal walk:-) many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Poet Destroyer A December 28, 2014 at 10:18 AM A G., Congratulations, on your win. Many enjoyable Autumn poem. Stop by my latest blog "Autumn's Gown" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty September 13, 2014 at 10:49 AM I have seen poets love hot coffee during onset of Autumn. Happy to know her ethos has going even with you. So good luck. Enjoy fun. Your poem is sweet. I liked the lines :"Walking alone down the road, Hoping to leave my ghosts behind". Grand image. Love Anoucheka.