Autumn Blues

Blue asters wave beneath fall’s indigo streaked sky – bye bye summertime


Jan.3, 2018 for Silent One's 'Monoku 4: Colours' Contest
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Acrich Avatar
April 22, 2018 at 12:36 PM
:)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 12:17 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beauty Andrea. It is moving up the Best New Poems List! :/)
Smith Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 1:15 AM
A fitting poem to start the year. Excellent one liner that says it all. Though we are in the middle of glorious summer here in my part of NZ. Fondest regards David
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January 11, 2018 at 9:43 AM
Ha, I kind of miss Summer time... nice monoku. LINDA
A   Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 9:42 AM
oo, I see you are still running and enjoying all these contests win. I wonder if, I could ever enter as many. Maybe, I will this year. I took your advice and entered that one contest, you mentioned in your comment. Stay strong and positive this year. Always & Forever. The Poet Destroyer
Ashley Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Autumn blues aptly expressed with your beautiful imagery, Andrea. Congratulations for your fine win with your very lovely write. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Hagy Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 7:48 PM
Beautiful one liner Andrea...bye bye summer is right!... now the sky is purple for freeeeezing! :)
Y. Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 5:47 AM
Hi Andrea, You've penned a good one-liner with good imagery as well. I can't wait for Spring. Congrats on your winning write Alexis:-)
Dutta Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 10:56 PM
Excellent. Congrats
Scars Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 1:22 PM
beautiful monoku sweet Andrea, congrats! :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Nice imagery, Andrea. Congrats on our win! Hugs, Sandra
Gupta Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 4:31 AM
Congratulations, Andrea ...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 11:41 PM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win. Autumn blue is wonderful.
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 12:07 PM
- Hi Andrea, congratulations on your winning line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 11:39 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea..
Gauthier Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 11:19 AM
Lovely. Beautiful imagery and luscious flow - such a romantic scene. Bravo for this one. A FAVE for me Andrea.
Callus Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 9:53 AM
I too miss summertime, Andrea, but those blue asters are something to look forward to. Congratulations on your podium finish! Regards // paul
One Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 8:30 AM
p.s it is 2018 :)
One Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 8:29 AM
It will be back soon.. Congratulations on your placement in the colours monoku contest
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 6:22 AM
I know how much you enjoy summer. I hope the snow is not too high. I enjoyed this piece tinged with a bit of melancholy! : )
Gupta Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 5:24 AM
This is cool, Andrea ... Rich colors of nature ... So brilliantly penned ... Best wishes ...
Inman Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 4:48 AM
Beautiful imagery in your Monoku Andrea.
Anish Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 11:43 PM
Bye, bye autumn - there is a big storm in NY tonight! Pretty short poem here! Peace & Love Matt Anish
Tripp Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 7:18 PM
Oh that is a lovely vision. Nice poem, Andrea.
Krampe Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 6:27 PM
Lovely picture in your monoku, Andrea.
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