Autumn Blues

Blue asters wave beneath fall’s indigo streaked sky – bye bye summertime


Jan.3, 2018 for Silent One's 'Monoku 4: Colours' Contest
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Date: 4/22/2018 12:36:00 PM
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Date: 1/31/2018 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beauty Andrea. It is moving up the Best New Poems List! :/)
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Date: 1/14/2018 1:15:00 AM
A fitting poem to start the year. Excellent one liner that says it all. Though we are in the middle of glorious summer here in my part of NZ. Fondest regards David
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Date: 1/11/2018 9:43:00 AM
Ha, I kind of miss Summer time... nice monoku. LINDA
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Date: 1/11/2018 9:42:00 AM
oo, I see you are still running and enjoying all these contests win. I wonder if, I could ever enter as many. Maybe, I will this year. I took your advice and entered that one contest, you mentioned in your comment. Stay strong and positive this year. Always & Forever. The Poet Destroyer
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Date: 1/6/2018 9:12:00 PM
Autumn blues aptly expressed with your beautiful imagery, Andrea. Congratulations for your fine win with your very lovely write. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/6/2018 7:48:00 PM
Beautiful one liner Andrea...bye bye summer is right!... now the sky is purple for freeeeezing! :)
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Date: 1/6/2018 5:47:00 AM
Hi Andrea, You've penned a good one-liner with good imagery as well. I can't wait for Spring. Congrats on your winning write Alexis:-)
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Date: 1/5/2018 10:56:00 PM
Excellent. Congrats
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Date: 1/5/2018 1:22:00 PM
beautiful monoku sweet Andrea, congrats! :)-luloo
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Date: 1/5/2018 9:35:00 AM
Nice imagery, Andrea. Congrats on our win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/5/2018 4:31:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea ...
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Date: 1/4/2018 11:41:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win. Autumn blue is wonderful.
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Date: 1/4/2018 12:07:00 PM
- Hi Andrea, congratulations on your winning line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/4/2018 11:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea..
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Date: 1/4/2018 11:19:00 AM
Lovely. Beautiful imagery and luscious flow - such a romantic scene. Bravo for this one. A FAVE for me Andrea.
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Date: 1/4/2018 9:53:00 AM
I too miss summertime, Andrea, but those blue asters are something to look forward to. Congratulations on your podium finish! Regards // paul
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Date: 1/4/2018 8:30:00 AM
p.s it is 2018 :)
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Date: 1/4/2018 8:29:00 AM
It will be back soon.. Congratulations on your placement in the colours monoku contest
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Date: 1/4/2018 6:22:00 AM
I know how much you enjoy summer. I hope the snow is not too high. I enjoyed this piece tinged with a bit of melancholy! : )
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Date: 1/4/2018 5:24:00 AM
This is cool, Andrea ... Rich colors of nature ... So brilliantly penned ... Best wishes ...
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Date: 1/4/2018 4:48:00 AM
Beautiful imagery in your Monoku Andrea.
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Date: 1/3/2018 11:43:00 PM
Bye, bye autumn - there is a big storm in NY tonight! Pretty short poem here! Peace & Love Matt Anish
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Date: 1/3/2018 7:18:00 PM
Oh that is a lovely vision. Nice poem, Andrea.
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Date: 1/3/2018 6:27:00 PM
Lovely picture in your monoku, Andrea.
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