Autumn

Haiku/Tanka/Haiku for Linda-Marie's contest. Autumn has arrived the gentle years are calling love, life at harvest. Friends like old armchairs come to coffee the morning glide in the porch swing and we reminisce for hours; pastel roses without thorns. Come with me my love, take my hand; we'll go walking west, into the sun.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2010 5:13:00 AM

Congratulations Wayne on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Harvest Of Happiness". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2010 11:17:00 PM

LIke a nice retirmement poem to go with the autumn of one's years. Very lovely. Congratulations, Wayne.

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/20/2010 11:37:00 AM

I love it, congrats on your win in the contest

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 9/20/2010 9:16:00 AM

What a beautiful image you set, Wayne. I especially like the "come to coffee the morning" line. Perfect. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Date: 9/19/2010 8:06:00 PM

Very nice poem Wayne, Sounds like a nice Autumn journey walking west into the sun. Congratulations on the contest. Love Scarlett

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/19/2010 2:47:00 PM

enjoyed reading today and congrat in the contest!! well done!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/19/2010 4:29:00 AM

Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Wayne

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/19/2010 12:28:00 AM

Congrats Wayne on your success in my Harvest of Happiness contest.. with this wonderful write depicting this beautiful season.. appreciate your support of my contests..with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2010 10:32:00 AM

Friends are much like old armchairs -- we feel comfortable with them and they are always there for us. I like the way you compared the golden years of life to the fall harvest, Wayne. A delightful entry for the contest and I wish you success. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2010 8:50:00 PM

Such wonderful images here of fall, Wayne. Thanks for sharing. LUv, Andrea

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/13/2010 8:26:00 AM

What a wonderful and lovely sketch of Autumn and what a beauty in ' Friends like old armchairs come to coffee the morning glide in the porch swing and we reminisce for hours; pastel roses without thorns.' Great write my friend and my best wishes for the contest....Ravindra.........Wayne Sapp.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/11/2010 6:15:00 PM

Very creative haikus with nice images , Wayne

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/11/2010 1:47:00 PM

thankxxx for supporting my new contest Wayne ..good luck with this superb piece..luv..

Deb Wilson

Date: 9/11/2010 4:34:00 AM

Just wonderful! Especially liked "friends like old armchairs"...Best of luck in the contest..Take care ~Deb

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/10/2010 10:20:00 PM

a wonderful entry for the contest, good luck, I enjoyed reading this ..P.D.