Autumn

pearls dust crinkly brown leaves leaving them soft and vulnerable whispers ruffle their existence threatening to tear them from their limbs do not be afraid, a kind whisper enticing in the heat seductive under their cool touch one by one they slide down one snap, another, a flurry of oranges and browns and reds and then nothing, only naked trees shiver.

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Silent One

Date: 1/7/2018 7:35:00 AM

This is a poem expressing vulnerability, great use of metaphor and well expressed... Welcome to poetry soup Lukas...

Lukas Andrew
Date: 1/9/2018 7:32:00 PM

Thankyou so much... hope to express in a better way in my future inputs :)

Anonim Anonim

Date: 1/2/2018 8:48:00 AM

after reading your last poem 'solitude' wanted to read more of you. autumn is also beautiful described by you and revealing very deep delicateness of yours

Lukas Andrew
Date: 1/2/2018 4:01:00 PM

Thankyou so much. :) you ll definitely get to read more of me soon... n yes, my delicateness reaches to you because of your delicate n sensitive approach mam.. :)