Lukas Andrew Poet Acrostic

Autumn

pearls dust
crinkly brown leaves
leaving them soft
and vulnerable
whispers ruffle their
existence
threatening to
tear them from their limbs
do not be afraid,
a kind whisper
enticing
in the heat
seductive
under their cool touch
one by one
they slide down
one snap,
another,
a flurry of oranges and browns and reds
and then nothing,
only naked trees shiver.

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Silent One January 7, 2018 at 7:35 AM This is a poem expressing vulnerability, great use of metaphor and well expressed... Welcome to poetry soup Lukas... Lukas Andrew January 9, 2018 at 7:32 PM Thankyou so much... hope to express in a better way in my future inputs :)

Anonim Anonim January 2, 2018 at 8:48 AM after reading your last poem 'solitude' wanted to read more of you. autumn is also beautiful described by you and revealing very deep delicateness of yours Lukas Andrew January 2, 2018 at 4:01 PM Thankyou so much. :) you ll definitely get to read more of me soon... n yes, my delicateness reaches to you because of your delicate n sensitive approach mam.. :)