Autumn

Leaves fall softly As the wind echoes Shades of auburn fading With each lost moment Images of your face Shine clearly, as my hand Touches the sky.

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Sue Mason

Date: 1/17/2009 3:36:00 PM

"Shades of autumn" beautiful write here, Reem!! And now its coming upon Spring soon ... round and round they go ... smile ... congratulations on having this beautiful write as a feature here at the Soup!!

Alana Tye

Date: 1/16/2009 7:10:00 AM

Congrats on your well-deserved feature. :) Cheers, Alana

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/14/2009 3:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week...Raul

C. E. Mcmullin

Date: 1/13/2009 3:34:00 PM

Well done and a well deserved place in the featured list; another one to add to my favorites list- Mac

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 1/12/2009 6:04:00 PM

Congratulations Reem on "Autumn" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/12/2009 6:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Reem. Love, Carol

Judith Angell Meyer

Date: 1/11/2009 10:35:00 PM

Oh my! Lovely ... congratulations on being featured this week. ~J~

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/11/2009 1:59:00 PM

This is a lovely poem of Autumn. Well done, and well deserved to be a featured work this week!! Congratulations!~ Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/11/2009 1:24:00 PM

Congratulations Reem on your beautiful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

Date: 1/11/2009 12:24:00 PM

Nice use of imagery in this poem. It has such a peaceful feel to it. Congratulations on being featured this week! Keep on writing. Karen