Autumn

Autumn Colorful leaves Dance blown by brisk breezes Soon all leaves will crunch beneath feet Autumn

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Matthew Anish

Date: 11/11/2013 2:44:00 PM

Nice seasonal poem! The "tribe" is the Jewish people. Xanadu is a poem by S.T. Coleridge - it is excellent! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jack Horne

Date: 11/10/2013 1:34:00 PM

another autumn beauty : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2013 6:59:00 PM

boy you are in an autumn mood and putting out lots of poems today!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/9/2013 9:50:00 AM

This is such a beautiful and inspiring write my friend! You have delighted me by your creative writing with this wondrous poem here this morning! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/8/2013 6:16:00 PM

- A poem that appeals my heart Sara, lovely!! - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/8/2013 4:18:00 PM

Loved this one!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 11/8/2013 1:59:00 PM

You do make autumn sound very inviting. Shame I'm at the other end of the seasons.

Kiran Bantawa

Date: 11/8/2013 9:44:00 AM

lovely autumn.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/8/2013 8:15:00 AM

Choreography of Autumn painted by Sara! Excellent!