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a leaf falls from an October tree hitches a ride on the breeze before drifting to earth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 10/1/2019 8:06:00 PM
Reading this poem reminded me that the Earth is often called the “Water Planet”. I thought that the dead leaves would get a fresh life again by falling on the the water planet. I felt the beginning of life beyond the end of life.
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Carol Fillmore
Date: 10/1/2019 8:13:00 PM
Thank you for your comment Ritsuko!!
Date: 9/18/2010 6:37:00 AM
I enjoyed the flavor of this one..Like riding on the wind..Sara
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Date: 9/8/2010 8:40:00 PM
this is wonderful!!!
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Date: 9/8/2010 1:33:00 PM
like this one, on the leafs journey lol, i like the second line, enjoyed your write...P.D.
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Date: 9/8/2010 1:15:00 PM
Cool~I watched this event in my minds eye~Great imagery~God bless you Carol~Rick
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